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DreamEvil
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0 posted 01-02-2000 02:49 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Many times has she soothed my savage fears.
She held me in the comfort of her rhyme.
This night 'twas I who rocked away her tears.
That she feels so alone is heinous crime.
My love rose to challenge her own self-doubt.
In soothing tones I spoke of her true worth.
This love we share is what life's all about.
She has been destined for greatness since birth.
Our words did weave a passionate spell.
We spoke of intimacies lovers share.
In the embrace of love these two hearts dwell.
The touch of Heaven blessed a love this rare.
The parting between us was sweet sorrow.
That will relent when we speak tomorrow.


©2000 DreamEvil


 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
-------------------------------------------------------
"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

© Copyright 2000 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Julie Jordan Scott
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1 posted 01-02-2000 02:54 AM       View Profile for Julie Jordan Scott   Email Julie Jordan Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Julie Jordan Scott's Home Page   View IP for Julie Jordan Scott

How beautifully descriptive are your words, Scott, how caring and loving they are.  It is marvelous to see how you are revelling in taking the caretaker role for your dear love.  Quite a powerful role, and an equally testimony of your emotional and spiritual connection.

 I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting
men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn
live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the
Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the
bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment
to pursue my own purpose and passion.

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 01-02-2000 02:56 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Absolutely beautiful Scott....one of your best works  
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)


3 posted 01-02-2000 04:00 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

very nicely written dream yuh she does have a once in a lifetime fortune o bein cared by the likes o you
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 01-02-2000 04:02 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

A tender, poetic portrait of adoration. Quite engaging.
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 01-02-2000 06:20 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Scott have I told you before that you are a wonderful poet, if not, I am now!!  This is great!!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 01-02-2000 08:05 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Two thumbs up from this woman
Very tender and well written
Liz
Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap


7 posted 01-02-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

You know it always brings a smile to my face to hear you speak of your love, my friend.  You are a wonderful poet, but I believe your songs of love are my favorite.

Best wishes in the New Year to you and your Lady.

--Kess


 You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.



[This message has been edited by Skyfyre (edited 01-02-2000).]
caroline
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8 posted 01-02-2000 11:50 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I have to agree with Kess, my little Tin Man.
Your heart mixes extra magic into the ink.  


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Denise
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9 posted 01-02-2000 12:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful and beautiful!

 Denise

Poet deVine
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10 posted 01-02-2000 01:04 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very good poem. Perhaps there is a lesson here for all of us....find that one person if you can, and through them, find peace and love....then spread it around you...  
Terrina Kethryveris
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11 posted 01-02-2000 02:43 PM       View Profile for Terrina Kethryveris   Email Terrina Kethryveris   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terrina Kethryveris

'Tis nice to see this part of you my friend, always leaves me feeling all warm and fuzzy inside.  

And what a way to start off the new year with love and hope for the future.

Terri


 Truth be known, fantasy is much more appealing than reality.
DreamEvil
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12 posted 01-02-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you all for your words but they are better directed to she who is the heart and soul of this verse.  

Love does indeed temper all things in its flames just as it warms a cold heart.


 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
-------------------------------------------------------
"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

Severn
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13 posted 01-02-2000 06:48 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Scott - this is stunning.
It is nice to see your heart in your words, my friend.

K

 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara
mama duck
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since 12-31-1999
Posts 43
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14 posted 01-02-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for mama duck   Email mama duck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mama duck

I can only imagine her delight at the gift of your beautiful words. A very lucky lady indeed. Wonderfully done. Chris
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


15 posted 01-03-2000 03:55 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Though tomorrow be a thousand years away, I believe your heartfelt words ring clearly my friend!
 
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