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Animosity is lost upon me....

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The Jackal
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0 posted 01-01-2000 11:25 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

flowering animosity
do what comes naturally
believe you belong
your one of the spoken ones
allowed to have a thought
faces stare at the empty sun
are you scared yet?
just breathe eternally
in what they make of me
watch shadows follow close behind
and know this..
even I can hurt back..sometimes
© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 01-01-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

wonderful poem  
Astraea
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2 posted 01-01-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Very nice.  Me like.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 01-02-2000 12:10 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow...there's a great deal said in this one Jackal
Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 01-02-2000 01:22 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Very powerful, I enjoyed the read!

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

devina
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5 posted 01-02-2000 05:06 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Good poem, I must agree with the thoughts behind this one.

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Denise
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6 posted 01-02-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes. I like this too. Much said with few very well chosen words!

 Denise

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