Animosity is lost upon me....

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Open Poetry #5

Animosity is lost upon me....

The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13

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Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-01 11:25 PM

flowering animosity
do what comes naturally
believe you belong
your one of the spoken ones
allowed to have a thought
faces stare at the empty sun
are you scared yet?
just breathe eternally
in what they make of me
watch shadows follow close behind
and know this..
even I can hurt back..sometimes

whiskey

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since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

1 posted 2000-01-01 11:33 PM

wonderful poem

Astraea
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since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

2 posted 2000-01-01 11:39 PM

Very nice. Me like.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 2000-01-02 12:10 PM

Wow...there's a great deal said in this one Jackal

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

4 posted 2000-01-02 01:22 AM

Very powerful, I enjoyed the read!

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devina
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since 1999-10-28

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Cali

5 posted 2000-01-02 05:06 AM

Good poem, I must agree with the thoughts behind this one.

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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-01-02 04:17 PM

Yes. I like this too. Much said with few very well chosen words!

Denise

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