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From roof to bed

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 01-01-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

A poem from my distant past.

      From Roof to Bed    

Once abed, in deepest slumber,
Peaceful and without encumber,
I awoke to a rude invite,
The sounds of piercing rain at night.

I turned away, in half awake,
From a dream now half opaque,
Listening to the strident sound,
Raging echoes off the ground.

The air heavy, moist and full
Smelt to me, of wet lambs wool.
But I ignored this rank and bore
Closed my eyes and slept once more.

Rain had leaked from roof to bed
And wet warmed, my woolen spread.
And though I lay in candor arm,
My sleep had won a brand new charm.

When the sun did finally show,
I was smiling, wet head to toe.
For woolens wet comfort it seems,
Stimulates the wildest dreams.

I cannot tell you the ethereal scene
But it ended in a physical mean.
© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 01-01-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
  Don't worry, dear, this was very explicit.
And very funny.
Liz
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2 posted 01-01-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

wonderful , So good   I like this

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3 posted 01-01-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh my! How hillarious!  

 Denise

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 01-01-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Liz,
Glad you enjoyed the humor.
*L* Sy
Whiskey,
Thanks for the wonderful comment.
Denise,
Thanks for the read and nice comment.
*L* Sy
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 01-02-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

ROFL....Seymore, you just shattered all my thoughts of you by posting this poem...just teasing, thought it was very funny  
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 01-02-2000 08:10 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dear Hoot,
I've always had a strange sense of humor, but I'm glad you enjoyed the humor of this strange poem. *L* Sy
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7 posted 01-02-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

...um....LOL..... gee, Sy... could you explain??? I'm having a blonde moment....
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8 posted 01-02-2000 12:23 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

ROFL... great one, Seymour!!
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 01-02-2000 12:39 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
I don't know Nan, Elizabeth thought it rather
explicit? What's a blonde moment? *L* Sy
Suthern,
Did I really Well........ROLF.
Thanks for the great. *L* Sy
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10 posted 01-02-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sy, a blonde moment is when you sell your car for gas money!

Enjoyed the read  
Seymour Tabin
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Balladeer,
Very funny, I'll have to remember that. Thanks for the comment see you wed.
Pepper
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LOL   Smiling here Sy!
Loved the humor here...the last stanza was hilarious..

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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13 posted 01-04-2000 02:42 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

LoL  great poem

What do blondes and a turtle have in common?

oh wait thats um a bit inappropriate..hmmm how about...

What do blondes and a screen door have in common?

Darnit, thats to inappropriate too.  Oh I know!!...

What do blondes and a beer bottle have in common??


And yes, I am a natural blonde, I just choose to have artificial intelligence...unlike the people who dye their hair bonde to have artifical stupidity!!  

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~
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14 posted 01-04-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pepper,
Thank you sweet Pepper *L* Sy
Echo,
Very clever, enjoyed your response thank you.
 
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