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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca 
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Okay, here's my attempt number 2 at posting something in here for today. I'm sitting here at work right now having a grand old time reading all the poetry here....there's SOOOO much, how am I expected to ever read it all? So many of you who write here are so talented!!! Okay, one more poem from me and then I'm going to spend the rest of my shift reading!! REVELATIONS There is a revelation, in all that we read. A prophecy, in all that we know. So why must Abaddon come, or a third of our population die, before we are freed from our sorrow? |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Me like. Short, to the point, and lovely. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like a great job ya got there Red! hehehehe  Are they hiring?!  Denise |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Short but very good , |
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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca |
hehe, I work on tech support for a call centre Denise....... noone calls on New Years day.... I can't usually spend my shift reading.LOL Which reminds me....HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!!! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Red, short and to the point indeed. Very welldone! And you are right, there are MANY wondeful talented poets here, and I find myself overwhelmed trying to read all the poems sometimes (thats why half the time I dont) ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
The good ol' revealing! But Abbadon already drew those third..and we are already freed by Jesus! Short but says a lot! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
What or who why is an "Abaddon"? You say you're at work? You're fired. hehehe nice to meetcha |
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