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Red
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0 posted 01-01-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for Red   Email Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Red


Okay, here's my attempt number 2 at posting something in here for today.  I'm sitting here at work right now having a grand old time reading all the poetry here....there's SOOOO much, how am I expected to ever read it all?  So many of you who write here are so talented!!!  Okay, one more poem from me and then I'm going to spend the rest of my shift reading!!

REVELATIONS

There is a revelation,
in all that we read.
A prophecy,
in all that we know.
So why must Abaddon come,
or a third of our population die,
before we are freed from our sorrow?
© Copyright 2000 Melissa - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
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1 posted 01-01-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Me like.  Short, to the point, and lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Denise
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2 posted 01-01-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds like a great job ya got there Red! hehehehe    

Are they hiring?!  

 Denise

whiskey
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3 posted 01-01-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Short but very good ,  
Red
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4 posted 01-01-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Red   Email Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Red

hehe, I work on tech support for a call centre Denise....... noone calls on New Years day.... I can't usually spend my shift reading.LOL

Which reminds me....HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!!!
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 01-02-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Red, short and to the point indeed.  Very welldone!  And you are right, there are MANY wondeful talented poets here, and I find myself overwhelmed trying to read all the poems sometimes (thats why half the time I dont)

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

WhtDove
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6 posted 01-02-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

The good ol' revealing!  But Abbadon already drew those third..and we are already freed by Jesus!  Short but says a lot!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Justin Thyme
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7 posted 01-02-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for Justin Thyme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Thyme

What or who why is an "Abaddon"?

You say you're at work?

You're fired.

hehehe

nice to meetcha
 
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