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Geo
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0 posted 01-01-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for Geo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Geo

Just a Note

My head is full of wonders
My mind just seems to roam
That is why I sit here
Writing poems

The feelings and things I write of
on paper for you to read
are the things that make my life
just wonderful for me

Now my mind is roaming
so I must let you go
to sit with pen and paper

To write another poem



 
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Astraea
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since 11-09-1999
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1 posted 01-01-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Very nice.  Me like!

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."



[This message has been edited by Astraea (edited 01-01-2000).]
Red
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2 posted 01-01-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for Red   Email Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Red

This is really cute, I like it!!!! I'd make you a little smiley face and say good job but I don't know how.lol  Keep on writing!!
)-----this will have to do----  )
Red
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3 posted 01-01-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for Red   Email Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Red

Hey.....How did I make those smiley face?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! nevermind.lol
Denise
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4 posted 01-01-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Cute! Welcome to Passions!  

 Denise

littleJas
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since 12-22-1999
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Australia


5 posted 01-01-2000 10:09 PM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

Great poem , welcome  
whiskey
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6 posted 01-01-2000 10:12 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

So cute , welcome  
Nan
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7 posted 01-01-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very cute, Geo..... Welcome to Passions...
Eloise
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since 11-27-1999
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8 posted 01-01-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Enjoyed your poem Geo.  Welcome to Passions  
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 01-01-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions  
mama duck
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since 12-31-1999
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Northern California


10 posted 01-02-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for mama duck   Email mama duck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mama duck

Geo, Welcome aboard.   Chris
Echo Rhayne
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11 posted 01-02-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Very good, welcome to passions!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Tamera
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12 posted 01-02-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Very good, enjoyed!
Tamera
FreeByrd
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13 posted 01-02-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for FreeByrd   Email FreeByrd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit FreeByrd's Home Page   View IP for FreeByrd

Nicely done Geo.
Puts forth a pleasant feeling. Enjoyed.
Welcome
-RS

 There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix


caroline
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14 posted 01-02-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Welcome to Passions Geo    Lovely little entrance poem!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Paul Hoekman
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since 12-28-1999
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15 posted 01-02-2000 12:41 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Hey Geo, welcome aboard, this is a great place glad you found us,enjoyed your first poem looking forward to more,
            Paul

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Marilyn
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since 09-26-1999
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16 posted 01-02-2000 12:52 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Welcome to Passions. A nicer bunch you will never find. We will be looking forward to reading more of your work.
Justbleu
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17 posted 02-04-2000 02:31 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This is sooo cute!!  I really liked this!!  Hope to see more of your poems!!  

Welcome to Passions!!

Take Care
Bridgette


 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."
WhtDove
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18 posted 02-04-2000 11:08 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Hey Geo! This was a neat little poem!  I see your getting the warm welcome of Passions!  
SEA
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with you


19 posted 02-04-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Geo, Welcome! Nice start! Will look for more! -SEA
Nate Dogg
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since 11-15-1999
Posts 1691
Georgia, Fulton


20 posted 02-04-2000 11:59 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Wow, so short and precise! That's just the way I like it!

 Nathan
 
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