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whiskey
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0 posted 01-01-2000 08:51 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

  "Love away"

As I sit and think of you
I wonder what it is you do
That happiness you give to me
Your heart it shines the light I see
It gides me too the right of life
And keeps me safe and out of strife
Your face I long to look and see
The day your here beside of me
Untill that day I feel  within
The dreams of you upon my skin
The biggest smile you will recieve
That first moment our eyes do meet
Months will pass and I can wait
To see you come through that gate
I know not long you will stay
Then my love you'll take away
Back to your home in foreign land
Again to long for my man
One thing you will leave with me
And that be sweet memories


[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-01-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
littleJas
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1 posted 01-01-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

Very Nice  
Denise
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This is beautiful, whiskey! Very very nice!

 Denise

far and away
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Very nice poem!  I hope to more of your poems in the future!
Astraea
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4 posted 01-01-2000 10:09 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Another lovely one.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

highwayman
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5 posted 01-01-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

becareful what you wish for, sometimes it comes true and others they don't.  You never know, when you do get this men in your arms he just might not want to leave.

 
hoot_owl_rn
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I really hope it all works out as you want it to Julie, wishing you both the best  
Kelylee
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7 posted 01-02-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for Kelylee   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Kelylee

Brought tears to my eyes...as I too have someone I want...who lives so far away. Thanks for showing me I am not alone   Kelylee
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 01-02-2000 12:29 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Whiskey,
I'll drink to that one.
Nice job, nice poem. Sy
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