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caroline
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0 posted 01-01-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for caroline



Resolution


What becomes
of us now…
time has flown
untouched, unsalvageable,
wasted in fear
Come and gone,
another year
Rejoicing not in love
that pours, storm-like
Closing windows
slamming doors,
so many
vessels upon the floor
catching drops seeping
into irreparable cracks
in a ceiling
No patches will
hold the rain
Let the winds tear
back the roof and the
floods destroy the walls
and drench me
with the sea
that is
you


© caroline 2000



 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


© Copyright 2000 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-01-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I think a big W O W !! describes this poem nicely. This is very emotion producing, miss Caroline.
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2 posted 01-01-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I ditto Balladeer! This is fantastic!  

 Denise

jaxjoy
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3 posted 01-01-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for jaxjoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jaxjoy

Wonderful piece. Very rich with emotions.
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 01-01-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Caroline: Oh My!!!...Right between the eyes..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

whiskey
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5 posted 01-01-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Excellent poem , so emotion grabbing and wonderful, well done  
Michael
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6 posted 01-01-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

May this upcoming year not have you writing a "resolution" such as this next year.  My heart goes to you.  Excellent piece, Caroline.

Michael
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EXCELLENT Very well done Caroline, this one really packs a punch  
Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 01-01-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

very well written,
It's beautiful
Liz
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9 posted 01-02-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I 'echo' the WoW's!!!

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

mama duck
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10 posted 01-02-2000 01:41 AM       View Profile for mama duck   Email mama duck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mama duck

Incredibly well done.
DreamEvil
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11 posted 01-02-2000 04:20 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I wonder which meaning of "resolution" you refer my friend. All my hugs to you.  

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

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12 posted 01-02-2000 04:51 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Very emotional poem indeed!  good job.

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Nan
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OH yes..... Methinks I do not see enough postings from you, my friend...
FreeByrd
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14 posted 01-02-2000 10:21 AM       View Profile for FreeByrd   Email FreeByrd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit FreeByrd's Home Page   View IP for FreeByrd

Yes... Rekindle the feelings and emotions.
Very good
-RS

 There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix


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very movin miss caroline loved it yuh
caroline
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16 posted 01-02-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Thanks so much, everyone...y'all always manage to pick my heart back up when its slipping down.    


Nan...I'm gonna try...honest!

(Dream...let's just say I made a little resolution I'm not gonna "chicken" out of  )


 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Martie
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Very powerful and moving poem, Caroline.
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