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There Is No Darkness Here (repost)

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Poet deVine
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0 posted 01-01-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine

There is no darkness here
only the twilight of another day
softly spoken night words of love
are all youíre allowed to say.

Bring your heart into this quiet
and lay down upon my breast
breath slowly and enjoy
the solitude of this rest.

Worry not about the morrow
it will be there when you wake
put yourself into my hands
you give and I will take.

Give me your harried worries
give me your day of stress
Iíll take your cares and stroke them,
soothe them with my caress.

In perfect harmony, weíll sit
and wait til your soul is eased
then with your smile Iíll know,
that you have been well pleased.



[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 01-01-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 01-01-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This poem leaves me well pleased, PdV.  One of my favorites of yours.  Breathtaking.


Michael
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2 posted 01-01-2000 05:17 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Such beautiful, loving words to give one rest....the most needed seldom offered gift.
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3 posted 01-01-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I've always loved this one, deVine one. It gives such a feeling of tranquility.
Denise
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4 posted 01-01-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So beautiful and comforting! Well done, PdV!

 Denise

RainbowGirl
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5 posted 01-01-2000 07:26 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

PDV: Exquisite..

HUSG

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 01-01-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I don't remember this one from before PDV, but it's very lovely. I like the calming effect that not only the words, but also the meter to this one have  
Echo Rhayne
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7 posted 01-02-2000 12:47 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautiful Pdv, absolutely brethtaking!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

mama duck
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8 posted 01-02-2000 12:54 AM       View Profile for mama duck   Email mama duck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mama duck

Lovely. One could almost melt into this poen and taste, for a moment, the sweetness of heaven of earth. A fine New Year's gift. Chris
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9 posted 01-02-2000 01:01 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Devine this certainly is a serene picture you paint!  Leaves one with calming thoughts.
BRAVO!!!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Nan
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10 posted 01-02-2000 09:18 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I've gotta agree - Relax and enjoy.....
John Foulstone
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11 posted 01-02-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for John Foulstone   Email John Foulstone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for John Foulstone

Oh, that felt so good! If you're not too
busy ... What? You're already spoken for?
Have you by any chance got a twin sister?
Nate Dogg
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12 posted 01-03-2000 06:09 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Wow, beautiful poem Devine! I see it has left an effect on Foulstone here!

 Nathan
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I almost fell asleep reading this it was sooo soothing!!

Can I make all your stuff my favorite ?

Craig


 Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.

Local Rebel
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14 posted 01-03-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

As peaceful as a swing on the porch, or sunlight breaking through clouds...

Very nice PDV
Fred Hobbs
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15 posted 01-03-2000 06:27 PM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs

It's great to see this one again Poet.  I don't get here often and seeing this is like catching up with an old friend.  You are very gifted. . .
Seaangel
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16 posted 01-03-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

lovely!
Tamera
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17 posted 01-03-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

PDV, you have calmed and moved me one more time! Beautiful! Tamera
doreen peri
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18 posted 01-03-2000 09:34 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Now, isn't that the kind of spoken love we all want and need to hear? Wonderfully written, Sharon... very well done, indeed! I believe I remember this one and it's good to read it again. Thank you.
Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 01-03-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

PoetdeVine,
Rest and nest upon your breast, that sounds good to me. *L* Sy
PS. One hell of a poem.
Poet deVine
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20 posted 01-03-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Just want you all to know how pleased I am that I could give you a moment of peace.. I must confess, I am renowned for my massages.. at work someone is always asking for one... so whether tis poetically or digitally, I can soothe away your cares!  
Eloise
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21 posted 01-04-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

This is absolutely beautiful.  Thanks for reposting it.
Elizabeth Santos
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22 posted 01-04-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Very tender and loving
As is the poet, obviously
Liz
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23 posted 01-05-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

Hi PdV!
Simply lovely! Do you sing too?
 
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