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The Jackal
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0 posted 01-01-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

i dont remember what i should do..
you cant and wont
let me come with you
purging myself in the face of it
setting myself up for the fall
but its even deeper than i thought
and this silence will never stop..
so far a drop
still you live
without the faintest idea
what it means to belong somewhere..

© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 01-01-2000 11:35 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another sad one, Jackal. I wish  you happiness in the New Year. Great poem!

 Denise

Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 01-01-2000 01:18 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

truly sad, I wish you happiness in the new year as well

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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So sad Jackal....may 2000 be the year to bring you happiness and love
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