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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-01 10:32 AM


i dont remember what i should do..
you cant and wont
let me come with you
purging myself in the face of it
setting myself up for the fall
but its even deeper than i thought
and this silence will never stop..
so far a drop
still you live
without the faintest idea
what it means to belong somewhere..


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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-01 11:35 AM


Another sad one, Jackal. I wish  you happiness in the New Year. Great poem!

 Denise


Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 2000-01-01 01:18 PM


truly sad, I wish you happiness in the new year as well

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2000-01-02 12:28 PM


So sad Jackal....may 2000 be the year to bring you happiness and love
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