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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-01 09:26 AM


" Hate "

Born to suffer
Mad to undress the pain of the heart
Instruct never to kill
On the verge of happiness and success

Death comes, confusion no connections
Of her boyfriend teenaged stoned

Will you die for me? Lets see
Feed me, in this way to the end
Haven't you seen my friend
Too much, no more, no more
Put to rest, peaceful


© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
maedavid
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1 posted 2000-01-01 10:20 AM


Very deep poem.  Only time can heal the heart, but one thing I've learned in life is that it always is darker just before the dawn.  Don't hang on to the bad things in life.  Let them go.  It will only turn you bitter.  Try to find something good to dwell on instead.  You are a very pretty girl and I'm sure God loves you.
whiskey
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2 posted 2000-01-01 07:24 PM


Thankyou, this poem was written some time ago and I now have love and happiness, Ive learnt that the bad things that have happend to me arent my fault, and that man is no longer able to hold my mind.  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-01 07:26 PM


I'm happy for you, Whiskey! Great poem!

 Denise


Michael
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4 posted 2000-01-01 07:49 PM


I'm glad you feel no longer that you were "born to suffer" - that line grabbed me right off.  Somehow, I believe the darkness we go through sometimes is for a reason.  I know I wouldn't appreciate the love offered me today if it weren't for some of the grief in my past.  The past is best,laid to rest - but doesn't necessarily need to be forgotten.

Michael

devina
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5 posted 2000-01-01 07:54 PM


I'm glad this sad part of your life is over, and may happiness find you in the new year!(From the looks of things, it already has- am I right? )

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Martie
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6 posted 2000-01-01 08:30 PM


This poem disturbed me until I read of your better times.  I'm glad!

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

First__Knight
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7 posted 2000-01-01 08:48 PM


THis left me feeling dark and lonely.  I see the feelings deep inside that led to this writing.  I am so glad that what led to this writing is of the past and that new lights shines on you.  Thank you for sharing  

 I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever.


hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 2000-01-01 08:58 PM


I'm glad you have gotten past the hate to love once more
whiskey
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9 posted 2000-01-01 09:07 PM


Thank you all for you kind words, And Yes Ive found love and I am so happy its just wonderful  
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