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whiskey
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0 posted 12-31-1999 11:24 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Cruel "

Living a life of cruel bindings
The servents have the power

Dog men and their mean pastures
Pulling blankets over our souls

I'm sick of down faces
Looking down at me from outside

I want to see roses in my garden
To dig up my thoughts from my brain

This mutant blood hungry for lust
Will strangle my mind

Put to rest my connection


© Copyright 1999 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-31-1999 11:31 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

As I twitch my nose, much like Tabatha does...if these are real thoughts about you, then go look them straight back in the eye..cause no one should ever feel they are looked down upon...on the other hand if this is abstract, I'm back to twitching my nose..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

whiskey
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2 posted 12-31-1999 11:45 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Rainbow,
Unfortunatley this is about me , one man inparticular and some horrible times in my life, some time ago , I now know love and know that is not what was right,
Thank you  
littleJas
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3 posted 01-07-2000 09:31 AM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

This is So sad you shouldnt feel like this ever if you need a friend email me
Nate Dogg
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4 posted 01-07-2000 09:50 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

What a great poem Whiskey. Indeed your words are depict anger and cruelness.

 Nathan
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Whiskey,
Well cleaning out the attic helps. Now you can lay new soil with new seed and grow beautiful flowers. *L* Sy
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6 posted 01-07-2000 10:04 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks Nate and Sy , you guys are so nice  
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Man!  This was really powerful, Whiskey Girl.  It initially came across as anger, but when I read it again, what really came out was hope and optimism.  What a wonderful talent you have to be able to pen a kaleidoscope of emotions so cleanly!  You know where the garden lies, and you know where the seed awaits.  And you also know the most important thing, the looking down is being done from the outside!  As long as you keep the inside looking up, you'll reap a wonderful garden of roses.
whiskey
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8 posted 01-07-2000 10:15 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks Long John your comments are apreciated
Paul Hoekman
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9 posted 01-07-2000 10:17 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Oh Whiskey!
I don't know what to say,
but sorry your feeling sad today,
chin up my friend don't go asunder,
your my only friend from the land down under,
please don't worry but be happy of good cheer
smile, laugh,dance and change that gear.
          Paul

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I hope you cheer up soon  

[This message has been edited by littleJas (edited 01-07-2000).]
whiskey
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11 posted 01-07-2000 10:25 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks Paul and Littlejas I will cheer up soon for I am here where I am most at ease reading all the wonderful poems posted by all the wonderful poets  
Parker
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Whiskey,

Very thought provoking, I must think on this
some more, you have a wonderful way of writing.

James
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Whiskey, cheer up my friend! You are a wonderful writer, and you are loving again, just by touching everyone of us here...Thank you for sharing!  
Tamera
 
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