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The same old games

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amber
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 12-31-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber


After everything we have been through,
After all the time that has passed,
I thought I had your honesty,
You owe me at least, that.

I know that I recieve,
So much of your time,
But if you want your space,
Tell me and its fine.

But dont leave me to wonder,
About where you want to be,
When I'm waiting here to see you,
And everyone thinks your here with me.

Happy New Year baby,
The same old games agian?
I thought you outgrew them long ago,
And it all haas changed since then.

I guess my resolution,
Would be to hear no more lies from you,
Where are you now my love,
If you love me, tell the truth.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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since 09-21-1999
Posts 3657
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1 posted 12-31-1999 07:11 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Amber, it's so sad, but so well put.  I can appreciate your heartache.  The lies are never the real problem, they're merely smoke screens trying to hide ones guilt.  God is my refuge and strength.
Denise
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2 posted 12-31-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, very sad.

 Denise

Astraea
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3 posted 12-31-1999 09:10 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Very sad, but very true sometimes.  Very nicely done.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Georgia
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4 posted 12-31-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for Georgia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Georgia

amber i love that poem...from one so young!
that is truly the sentiment of many  on this occasion...wondering why the love of a persons life is not with them! And wanting only the truth!
keep writing..i know how you feel..
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 01-01-2000 12:21 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

hey do you know the same person I know?? =o)  Describes how I have felt before, and sometimes still do.  Great poem!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

amber
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7 posted 01-12-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thanks to everyone who commented on my poems. And Keeper, once agian i am glad to see you've taken the time to understand and read my poetry, thanks so much!
Meadowmuse
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8 posted 01-12-2000 01:42 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Amber, this piece flows with the air of experience. Makes it very believable. Reminds me of a dark torch song. Nicely done.

Dear LadyClaire

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