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Takes Two to Make a Kiss
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Takes Two to Make a Kiss |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Takes Two to Make a Kiss Takes two to love and two to make a kiss Takes two to feel the warmth of passion's bliss Takes two to look into each other's eyes And sing to one another lullabies Takes two to know the meaning of romance And two to swing into a ballroom dance Takes two to stand together face to face And two to share a passionate embrace Takes two to walk together hand in hand Into the splendor of love's wonderland Takes God to bless the union of the two And only God knows how I'm missing you So come to me and fill this deep abyss And two as one will share a tender kiss Elizabeth Santos |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Challenge met! Wonderful, Elizabeth!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thanks PDV, as I read over it, it turns out to be in iambic pentameter. I'm going to be dreaming in sonnets! Thank you Liz |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Loving poem Elizabeth, and very much enjoyed! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Two kisses for you Liz, XX, loved the poem. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Elizabeth! (I think iambic pentameter is addictive!....hehehehe)  Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Devina, Thanks Martie, Kisses back and Happy New Year Denise, See what you've done to me? Thanks Liz |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Its beautiful!!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a challange met....wonderful  |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
It took two poets to rise to this occasion. DeVine and Santos earn my admiration. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, One and one does not make two. Two is really one in true. Beautiful poem. *L* Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Echo, Hoot and Ted, Thanks, glad you liked it Liz Sy Thanks for the rhyme I like your mathematics Liz |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Very sweet poem! Happy New Year! Tamera |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I love this poem. It is so sweet. Happy New Year !~Susie~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All righty then.... smooch away... Nice job! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, lady poets Looks like we all agree Thank you Liz |
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Kelylee New Member
since 2000-01-02
Posts 2California |
I love your words...touching and wondeful to read Kelylee |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
BEAUTIFUL! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply beautiful Liz....and I would have made my 'beautiful' just as big as Caroline's....but I haven't a clue as to how to do that  A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all very much. Pepper, I can't help you and can't for the life of me figure out how they make the first letter bold in a acrostic. Liz |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nice job here Liz.....as your usual stuff always is.....it takes two fer sure.....(of course then there's masturbation....it's nice too but so lonely don't ya know?)...(at least Balladeer has a love life of some kind any how).......Hope you're doin well kid.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Toe, Well, there's that threesome you were telling me about, but that's not my style.Two is just perfect. Thanks form commenting on this poem Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hi Liz, I printed this out a few days ago to take a closer look at it and I really Love this poem. It is so simple and yet so passionate. Sometimes a kiss can be so special. James |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I enjoy iambic pentameter, as well as I enjoyed your poem, Elizabeth. Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Elizabeth, beautiful poem, makes me wish I was involved. James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
James, Thank you for reading and even printing it out.Glad you liked this poem Liz Elizabeth, I've been so busy, I haven't had time to read all the poetry, and a few of yours are top of my list. Thanks for your comments, you're so sweet Liz James, But you are here, in the right place, and may you enjoy all the passionate poems. Thank you for your kind remarks Liz |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Isn't the number two lovely? Beautiful job Elizabeth. B Gravitt |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow - Lizzy, this experimenting sure is paying off! Excellent! Iambic P indeed... K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Betty, Yes! Two is my favorite number Thanks Liz Kamla, Thank you, dear And yes, Pennsylvania is very near New York Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
*twinkle* *smile* - so d'ya think if I got on a plane, made it to NY, and climbed that big ol' lady you have over there I could see your house?  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kamla, No, but if you climbed the Limerick Nulear Power Plant towers you could! Just come on over. I'll go get you in New york Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ick! You live near one of those...? I forget...being in this nuclear free place... wish I could my friend! One day...! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I still like this poem. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice! |
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