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Takes Two to Make a Kiss

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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 12-31-1999 02:20 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Takes Two to Make a Kiss

Takes two to love and two to make a kiss
Takes two to feel the warmth of passion's bliss

Takes two to look into each other's eyes
And sing to one another lullabies

Takes two to know the meaning of romance
And two to swing into a ballroom dance

Takes two to stand together face to face
And two to share a passionate embrace

Takes two to walk together hand in hand
Into the splendor of love's wonderland

Takes God to bless the union of the two
And only God knows how I'm missing you

So come to me and fill this deep abyss
And two as one will share a tender kiss

Elizabeth Santos
© Copyright 1999 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 12-31-1999 02:22 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Challenge met! Wonderful, Elizabeth!  
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 12-31-1999 02:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Thanks PDV, as I read over it, it turns out to be in iambic pentameter. I'm going to be dreaming in sonnets!
Thank you
Liz
devina
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3 posted 12-31-1999 02:31 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Loving poem Elizabeth, and very much enjoyed!

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Martie
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4 posted 12-31-1999 03:09 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Two kisses for you Liz, XX, loved the poem.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
Denise
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5 posted 12-31-1999 05:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful, Elizabeth! (I think iambic pentameter is addictive!....hehehehe)  

 Denise

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 12-31-1999 05:48 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Devina, Thanks

Martie, Kisses back and Happy New Year

Denise, See what you've done to me?
Thanks
Liz
Echo Rhayne
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7 posted 01-01-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Its beautiful!!!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 01-01-2000 12:51 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

What a challange met....wonderful  
Ted Reynolds
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9 posted 01-01-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ted Reynolds

It took two poets to rise to this occasion.
DeVine and Santos earn my admiration.
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 01-01-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Liz,
One and one does not make two.
Two is really one in true.
Beautiful poem. *L* Sy
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 01-01-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Echo, Hoot and Ted,
Thanks, glad you liked it
Liz

Sy
Thanks for the rhyme
I like your mathematics
Liz
Tamera
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12 posted 01-01-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Very sweet poem! Happy New Year!
Tamera
Angel
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13 posted 01-01-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel

I love this poem. It is so sweet. Happy New Year  !

 ~Susie~


Nan
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14 posted 01-02-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

All righty then.... smooch away... Nice job!
Elizabeth Santos
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15 posted 01-02-2000 09:39 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Thank you, lady poets
Looks like we all agree
Thank you
Liz
Kelylee
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16 posted 01-02-2000 12:14 PM       View Profile for Kelylee   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Kelylee

I love your words...touching and wondeful to read   Kelylee
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17 posted 01-02-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

BEAUTIFUL!
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Simply beautiful Liz....and I would have made my 'beautiful' just as big as Caroline's....but I haven't a clue as to how to do that

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Elizabeth Santos
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19 posted 01-02-2000 03:24 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Thank you all very much. Pepper, I can't help you and can't for the life of me figure out how they make the first letter bold in a acrostic.
Liz
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20 posted 01-02-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nice job here Liz.....as your usual stuff always is.....it takes two fer sure.....(of course then there's masturbation....it's nice too but so lonely don't ya know?)...(at least Balladeer has a love life of some kind any how).......Hope you're doin well kid....
Elizabeth Santos
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21 posted 01-02-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Toe,
Well, there's that threesome you were telling me about, but that's not my style.Two is just perfect.
Thanks form commenting on this poem
Liz
JamesMichael
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22 posted 01-06-2000 03:53 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Hi Liz,   I printed this out a few days ago to take a closer look at it and I really Love this poem.   It is so simple and yet so passionate.   Sometimes a kiss can be so special.     James
Elizabeth
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23 posted 01-06-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I enjoy iambic pentameter, as well as I enjoyed your poem, Elizabeth.  

Elizabeth

 "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke
Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York."


Parker
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Elizabeth,

beautiful poem, makes me wish I was involved.

James
 
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