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It Always Takes Two (repost!)

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Poet deVine
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0 posted 12-31-1999 01:29 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine

It always takes two
Lightening and rain
To create a spectacular thunder

It always takes two
To make a couple
And three to tear it asunder.

It always takes two,
A child and God
To teach an adult to pray.

It always takes two,
Morning and night
To create one whole day.

It always takes two
To start a fight
That then becomes a war.

It always takes two
Any two at all
To know what we're fighting for.

It always takes two
A reader and poet
To put magic in what we write

It always takes two
Just you and me
To do what we think is right.


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Craig
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1 posted 12-31-1999 03:08 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


Another well written masterpiece from one of my favorite writers.




 Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.


Helpless
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2 posted 12-31-1999 04:35 PM       View Profile for Helpless   Email Helpless   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Helpless

Wonderful poem! I love it.
Keep up the good writing!
   Helpless
Denise
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3 posted 12-31-1999 05:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Amen! This is wonderful, Sharon!  

 Denise

Michael
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4 posted 12-31-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well done, and so very appropriate for the moment.  TY

Michael
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5 posted 01-01-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Applauds....wonderful  
Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 01-01-2000 12:47 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

You're right, and I will do what I think is right *clapping*  beautiful poem!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Nan
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One and one makes quite a pair..... I always did love yours..... I'm smilin'...
WhtDove
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8 posted 01-01-2000 05:45 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Encore!  Wonderful Devine! Just wonderful!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Ted Reynolds
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9 posted 01-01-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ted Reynolds

Very neat, very sweet.  This is one poem I will try to remember (in an already over-crowded mind.)  But may I gently disagree with only the last stanza -- to do what's right only takes one.    
SnglDad
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10 posted 01-22-2000 06:36 AM       View Profile for SnglDad   Email SnglDad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SnglDad

Another great piece  
This too needs to be put on top for all to see.
Thanx for sharing.

                                Joel
 
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