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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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i'll go to sleep come bedtime my bedtime is ne'er (as all the poets sigh) i'll go to sleep when i die i'll write and i'll write sometimes while eating pie sometimes to the hornmyc rhythm of the trains passing by but i'll ne'er go to sleep no not till i die some might say i'm a sadist but dear friend you seen my latest? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The title pulled me in, this too was good  At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very good. The title, too, pulled me in to read. Me like. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
You have good titles! I always have trouble with titles. I like your icon, too! And I can certainly relate to writing when I should, by all rights and means, be sleeping! Ah, a fellow poet! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Walt: and this is the man who said he couldn't find his words anymore... HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You seem to have no problem with finding words to me! I can relate to being up writing when I should be sleeping, though! Write 'till you pass out...seems to work for me! hehehehehe  Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o the fates yuh hehe tiz decided that this would be my last poem o 1999 what will i tell Saint Peter! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
well I say tis a good poem to end the century with, now we shall await the first one from you in the new year =o) ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well Walt....I'd tell him that you wrote a darn good one Love the title |
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