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whiskey
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0 posted 12-31-1999 12:14 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

  " Floating dream "

Last night a dream it came to me
Swimming in the ocean sea
Floating in the bluest deep
Away from me  my breath did creep
A picture came  to  mind
Of you , I another time
Long ago distant mind
Together ment for  life
Death will never part
My soul, love and heart
Inside it is of you
To live on ever through
Under stars the same
I hear you speak my name
Eyes closed vision of you
Are you dreaming too ?
Is it me you see
Floating  here I be

© Copyright 1999 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 12-31-1999 12:29 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Dreams, water, floating, love ,everything I
like in a poem.
        Awesome, Paul
Nate Dogg
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2 posted 12-31-1999 01:29 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

A nice dreamy poem indeed!

 Nathan
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Thank you Paul and Nate  
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Whiskey,
I've had those dreams too. Incredible!! Like being a dolphin or a whale. Maybe we'll both have more swimming dreams, they're too fun. Chris
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Yes, I agree! Very dreamy!  

 Denise

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Thank you Chris and Denise  
Elizabeth Santos
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And you will drift into another life together you will recognize his spirit.
That's the way it will be
Liz
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yes it is i who you see in your dreams.  Yes it is I who sees you in his own.  I swimm to you but you not there.  I scream your name, to nothing but air.  Yet I see you and can feel you here.  Help me to find the source of this light, so I can hold you near me, with all my might!!!

 
whiskey
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Thank you Liz  

Mike (highwayman)
You know how much I love you,
There is nothing more that I would like
Than to be there in your arms tonight
That light you speak Will come to you
And with it will be me so true

Seymour Tabin
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Whiskey,
Very nice enjoyed the read.
Tamera
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i enjoyed this very much...I do hope you are in his arms soon!  
Tamera
Geo
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Whiskey that was exceptional!! In a moment in a dream a forever of loving memories shared, no words spoken, as entwined souls have no need for them. Ten stars for you!!!
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