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Floating dream
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Floating dream " Last night a dream it came to me Swimming in the ocean sea Floating in the bluest deep Away from me my breath did creep A picture came to mind Of you , I another time Long ago distant mind Together ment for life Death will never part My soul, love and heart Inside it is of you To live on ever through Under stars the same I hear you speak my name Eyes closed vision of you Are you dreaming too ? Is it me you see Floating here I be |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Dreams, water, floating, love ,everything I like in a poem. Awesome, Paul |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A nice dreamy poem indeed! Nathan |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you Paul and Nate  |
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mama duck Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 41Northern California |
Whiskey, I've had those dreams too. Incredible!! Like being a dolphin or a whale. Maybe we'll both have more swimming dreams, they're too fun. Chris |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, I agree! Very dreamy! Denise |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you Chris and Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
And you will drift into another life together you will recognize his spirit. That's the way it will be Liz |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
yes it is i who you see in your dreams. Yes it is I who sees you in his own. I swimm to you but you not there. I scream your name, to nothing but air. Yet I see you and can feel you here. Help me to find the source of this light, so I can hold you near me, with all my might!!! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you Liz Mike (highwayman) You know how much I love you, There is nothing more that I would like Than to be there in your arms tonight That light you speak Will come to you And with it will be me so true |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Whiskey, Very nice enjoyed the read. |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
i enjoyed this very much...I do hope you are in his arms soon! Tamera |
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Geo Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 73Nebraska |
Whiskey that was exceptional!! In a moment in a dream a forever of loving memories shared, no words spoken, as entwined souls have no need for them. Ten stars for you!!! |
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