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agony
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0 posted 12-30-1999 09:42 PM       View Profile for agony   Email agony   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for agony



Why should love bring so much fear,to every souls heart?People
are afraid of people and that should nevr be.We are killing
each other off and no one seems to care.But should there be  a truce or a truth or dare?                   Tracy Schlieper

 
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whiskey
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1 posted 12-30-1999 10:42 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Very nice verse  
Astraea
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2 posted 12-30-1999 10:43 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Very nice.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 01-01-2000 07:12 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Very nice and I do care....I once heard someone say..."It is my philosophy that peace is something nobody wants but everybody strives for"  or was it the other way around *shrugs*  I dunno Happy New Year


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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4 posted 01-18-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I also care....I do wish more people did though!!  Nice little poem!!

Take Care
Bridgette
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5 posted 01-19-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Just a suggestion here, but perhaps by changing your format a bit, you'll make your piece a bit more reader friendly.

Why should love bring so much fear,
to every souls heart?
People are afraid of people
and that should never be.
We are killing each other off
and no one seems to care.
But, should there be a truce
or a truth or dare?

Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 01-20-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I must agree with Ruth, it does read a little easier that way!!  But it was still a great poem!


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


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