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To the wind, these words

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Kevin Taylor
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0 posted 12-30-1999 08:28 PM       View Profile for Kevin Taylor   Email Kevin Taylor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Kevin Taylor's Home Page   View IP for Kevin Taylor

To the wind, these words
To the sea, my soul
To the sky, all hope
To the earth, this bone

To you, my love,
And our children, joy

To the unseen, vision
Darkness, rhythm

And to my enemies
Who have always praised me loudest
Fullness, nothing more.



 Kevin




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Denise
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1 posted 12-30-1999 09:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem, Kevin!

 Denise

Nan
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2 posted 12-30-1999 10:03 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You do have a uniquely intriguing style... I like this..
Astraea
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3 posted 12-30-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Me like.  Very lovely.

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Paul Hoekman
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Excellent, Mr. Taylor, you truly have a gift. Paul
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5 posted 12-30-1999 11:10 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wondeful , I like this  
Meadowmuse
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You know, if this poem were just the first stanza, 'twould still be a lovely bit of writing. As it is, however, exquisite.
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7 posted 01-01-2000 07:29 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Exquisite!


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Hi kevin,

I just read your poem today and I feel you have a poignant way in writing. Wonderful poem, Kevin! and you do have a unique intriguing style. I like it very exquisite.

lucky
hoot_owl_rn
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Very nice one Kevin  
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