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May your world in 2000 be all you want and all you dream

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 12-30-1999 06:48 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

It starts off inside warm soft and very slow
brings life to our words and makes them flow
love and friendship start from a tiny fragment
words from the heart good wishes truly meant

We take so much for granted but all our emotions
live in tiny pockets and swim the deep wide oceans
till they reach out and hug you oh so tight
I feel it so much and know it is so right

The touch between us all the way we each respond
wiping away each other's tears the way we correspond
the gift of time that is so precious to each of us
how we take life on the chin and make so little fuss

So my small way of saying thank you to each of you
letting me see your world from your point of view
for all the hugs the love the support and the smiles
makes my time here on PIP so very worthwhile

May your world in 2000 be all you want and all you dream
and if they don't come true perhaps it wasn't a team
we all hope of a love that makes our eyes shine with delight
and when that happens our hearts will know it is right...

HUGS



 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.





[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-30-1999).]
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Tamera
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1 posted 12-30-1999 07:36 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Rainbowgirl, I have tears in my eyes and a smile on my face. What a wonderful tribute to all your friends here in PIP, may 2000 be all you want it to be and more. If I could reach through this screen and hug you, I would this very second...Hugs to you, and Happy New Year!!!  
Tamera
Poet deVine
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2 posted 12-30-1999 07:38 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

My dear friend this is one of your best! Thank you!  
cjs9853
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3 posted 12-30-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for cjs9853   Email cjs9853   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for cjs9853

wonderful rainbow i have really enjoyed your poems.they have touched me deeply. i wish you rainbow a very happy new year filled with good health,happiness,god's blessings and good luck in 2000
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 12-30-1999 08:11 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I wish the same for you my friend  
RainbowGirl
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5 posted 12-30-1999 08:26 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Bless you..  

Tamera: Your hugs are felt sweetheart...screens can feel husg and softness ...true, they can..  

HUGS

PDV: You are most welcome, it's a priviledge to know you..  

HUSG

CJS: And a wonderful year 2000 to you and my nephews and neices...  

HUSG

Hoot: Aren't we soppy...LOL...but I guess that's females for you..*g* always loving, always giving and never afraid to do so either..  

HUSG

Elizabeth: If you read this, this is for you, my translation won't be as good as yours but it answers your question on an earlier poem..  

Por el amor de una mujer  
jugué con fuego sin saber  
que era yo quien me quemaba  
bebí en las fuentes del placer  
hasta llegar a comprender  
que no era a mi a quien amaba.  

Por el amor de una mujer  
he dado todo cuanto fuí  
lo más hermoso de mi vida  
mas ese tiempo que perdí  
ha de servirme alguna vez  
cuando se cure bien mi herida.  

Todo me parece  
como un sueño todavía,  
pero sé que al fin,  
podré olvidar un día.  

Hoy me siento triste  
pero pronto cantaré  
y prometo no acordarme nunca  
del ayer.  

Por el amor de una mujer  
llegué a llorar y enloquecer  
mientras ella se reía  
rompí en pedazos un cristal  
dejé mis venas desangrar  
pues no sabía lo que hacía.  

Por el amor de una mujer  
he dado todo cuanto fuí  
lo más hermoso de mi vida  
mas ese tiempo que perdí  
ha de servirme alguna vez  
cuando se cure bien mi herida.  

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.





[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-30-1999).]
Martie
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6 posted 12-30-1999 08:27 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You friendship door has always been so wide open with no screen needed, thank you for that and for this poem.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
Isis
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7 posted 12-30-1999 09:04 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

I too wish the same for year my friend.  Happy New Year and thanks for the wonderful poem and friendship.  You are a gem.  Happy New Year.  ((HUGS))

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 12-30-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Rainbow,
La poesia de usted es muy bonita, assi como esta cancion. Que linda las musicas de mi querido Julio!
I love the way you love, Rainbow.
Liz
Denise
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9 posted 12-30-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Such a lovely poem from such a lovely person! Have a wonderful New Year, Rainbow!  

 Denise

Echo Rhayne
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10 posted 12-31-1999 12:37 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

What a sweet poem!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Balladeer
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11 posted 12-31-1999 12:44 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

May it be all you want, also, dear Rainbow . Thank you for everything you are and represent..Best of all wishes to you
PhaerieChild
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12 posted 12-31-1999 02:50 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Rainbow, your friendship and willingness to extend friendship has meant much to many people here, myself included. I hope your year 2000 will surpass even your wildest expectations and your dreams be as beautiful you are. ((((Hugz)))) Happy New Year!!!  

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

wayoutwalt
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13 posted 12-31-1999 02:53 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

Rainbowgirl

Defender o all smileyfolks like me

thankythanky

Nan
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14 posted 12-31-1999 10:13 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

May everything you wish for be yours in the coming year, RG.... Great poem...
Pepper
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15 posted 12-31-1999 10:48 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Happy 2000 to you Rainbow.....may this new year bring you the best of everything......
Love your poem  
maedavid
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16 posted 12-31-1999 01:18 PM       View Profile for maedavid   Email maedavid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maedavid

I really like the way you said that our emotions live in tiny pockets and swim the deep wide oceans.  That is really graphic.  I have to look back on my life with some sadness because of the times I did not take the time to share with others as I should have.  The poets here at PIP share so much of themselves through their poetry.  I love it.  Happy New Year to all of you.

 The only way to know Love, is to Know God.
Nate Dogg
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17 posted 12-31-1999 01:52 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

I agree with pep, those two lines were classical. The rest of the poem is just terrific and a true testament of your wonderful talents. May God bless you!

 Nathan
 
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