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She's got soul

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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 12-30-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This one is also in the spiritual section.
I wrote this one in church while I watched a woman sing some soulful songs. I hope y'll like it.


Her strong alto, filled the church with grace
and she has everyone's attention.
The look on her face,
displayed lots of tension.
She dug down deep within her soul
and sang the song with all her might.
She shined like gold,
on this dreary night.
I felt her pain
and I felt her sorrow.
She's got me crying to the Lord in vain,
like there was no tomorrow.
Yeah, she has a gift,
as she reversed my flame to hot from cold.
She has the power to uplift
because, she's got that soul!

 Nathan
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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 12-30-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I like the format you used with this one  
Denise
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Uplifting!  

 Denise

Paul Hoekman
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If there is one thing I envy is a good voice
especially a soulful one.Enjoyed this Nate
           Paul
whiskey
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4 posted 12-30-1999 10:30 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful Nate, To be able to sing in such voice  
Astraea
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5 posted 12-30-1999 10:42 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Very nice.  Lovely!

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Elizabeth Santos
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Great subject matter
I love it!
Liz
Nate Dogg
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7 posted 12-31-1999 12:34 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you all for the lovely comments.

 Nathan
Echo Rhayne
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8 posted 01-01-2000 08:23 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Absolutely beautiful...I know a few people that have done the very same to me.  I am definitely not one of those people to do it for someone else though.


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Nate Dogg
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Thank you Echo!

 Nathan
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Oh I know this feeling to well.....Thank you for taking me there Nate.  I enjoyed this  to much  

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"


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