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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 1999-12-30 06:23 PM


This one is also in the spiritual section.
I wrote this one in church while I watched a woman sing some soulful songs. I hope y'll like it.


Her strong alto, filled the church with grace
and she has everyone's attention.
The look on her face,
displayed lots of tension.
She dug down deep within her soul
and sang the song with all her might.
She shined like gold,
on this dreary night.
I felt her pain
and I felt her sorrow.
She's got me crying to the Lord in vain,
like there was no tomorrow.
Yeah, she has a gift,
as she reversed my flame to hot from cold.
She has the power to uplift
because, she's got that soul!

 Nathan

© Copyright 1999 Nate Dogg - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-12-30 08:17 PM


I like the format you used with this one  
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-12-30 09:45 PM


Uplifting!  

 Denise


Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
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Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
3 posted 1999-12-30 10:01 PM


If there is one thing I envy is a good voice
especially a soulful one.Enjoyed this Nate
           Paul

whiskey
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4 posted 1999-12-30 10:30 PM


Wonderful Nate, To be able to sing in such voice  
Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
5 posted 1999-12-30 10:42 PM


Very nice.  Lovely!

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
6 posted 1999-12-30 11:13 PM


Great subject matter
I love it!
Liz

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
7 posted 1999-12-31 12:34 PM


Thank you all for the lovely comments.

 Nathan

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
8 posted 2000-01-01 08:23 AM


Absolutely beautiful...I know a few people that have done the very same to me.  I am definitely not one of those people to do it for someone else though.


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
9 posted 2000-01-03 05:50 PM


Thank you Echo!

 Nathan

First__Knight
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Posts 678

10 posted 2000-01-03 05:54 PM


Oh I know this feeling to well.....Thank you for taking me there Nate.  I enjoyed this  to much  

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"



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