From your spark I burst in flames Fusion, fission, fueling my fire. Rage inside me feels sharp as glass. Fear inside me I hope will pass. Your heat consumes me, leaves me barren as a forest you have touched, burnt by your enigmatic fury. Share your water with me. Quench the fire you have built within. Let me smolder through the night.
Each time I read this it keeps gettin' better and I finally found the rhythm and started seeing the picture your words were painting.. very well written. I like the way you put your feelings into subtle parables..keep up the good work...james david
Vivid wording, painting a sharply emotional picture - after several readings, I'm still coming up with new possible scenarios; the main one being pleasurably obvious. I really enjoy this one! Well done.