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Passionfruit
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since 1999-12-30
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0 posted 1999-12-30 05:24 PM



Hot are your kisses that I taste,
Hot is your love,
Hot is my hands around your waist,

Hot is the sun of your love glowing upon me,
Hot is the sweat of your skin,
Hot is this steamy love that we are in,


Hot is you,
You are so hot,
So sexy,

I crave you alot,
You are my hot,
I am getting hotter,

I am melting all over you,
burn me baby,

Hot is you!!!!


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Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
1 posted 1999-12-30 10:20 PM


This is way to HOT !! COLD SHOWER!!!
        much better now.
               Paul

whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278
Australia
2 posted 1999-12-30 10:23 PM


Its hot in here, Great poem,  Welcome  
Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
3 posted 1999-12-30 10:26 PM


Very nice.  Welcome to Passions!

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
4 posted 2000-01-01 07:04 AM


hot hot hot, and oh, did I mention?  HOT


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


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