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Mike
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since 1999-06-19
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0 posted 1999-12-30 03:58 PM


A single tear fell to the ground,
As he tried to stifle sound,
Of sniffles that came not from cold,
And in fact, if truth be told,
Would cry out loud, if was alone,
Instead of acting like a stone,
Reached in his pocket as he wept,
For rumpled hanky that he kept,
"I've got a cold," was heard to mutter,
"Or maybe allergies," went on to stutter,
"I'm sure that's true," said wife with smile,
While she giggled all the while,
"I know no reason that a feller,
Would cry because just saw "Old Yeller.""

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 12-31-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 1999-12-30 05:38 PM


Oh yeah??? Well... I cried when I saw "Bambi" too....
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-12-30 08:30 PM


LOL......I cry at the kleenex comercials, my son looks at me like I'm nuts  
Denise
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3 posted 1999-12-30 09:29 PM


Awwwwww...how touching! And funny too!  

 Denise


Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 1999-12-31 12:39 PM


Yeah well I cry when Eeyore loses his tail LoL...cute poem!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Isis
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5 posted 1999-12-31 12:42 PM


There is nothing wrong with a good cry!! Men included!!  My famous recent cries would be 'Deep Impact' and "steel Magnolias'.
A good cry refreshes the soul.
And my husband looks at me like I'm mad too Ruth!!  
Well done!!  

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Astraea
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6 posted 1999-12-31 12:45 PM


Very nice.  Lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


whiskey
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7 posted 1999-12-31 12:48 PM


Great poem !  
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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8 posted 1999-12-31 09:04 AM


A moving poem that made me smile!  What's wrong with crying over a sad movie?  Doesn't everyone?  Well, if not, then they should.  I certainly do.
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