Spring sprung (another old poem)

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Spring sprung (another old poem)

Master
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since 1999-08-18

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0 posted 1999-12-30 03:29 PM

Spring sprung so unexpected
From melting snow
I stood in awe
Observed perfection of its flow
So flawlessly performed
Each pitch connected
Played by the notes
Reformed in form
So worthy of great words
And yet neglected
My soul alone became affected
Pecked by the rain
In gained commotion
Grain after grain
I drained emotion
In proper fashion
Gentle motion
In passing rage
And raging passion
Unto the page

Master
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1 posted 1999-12-30 06:47 PM

I wrote this one a while ago, but since it seems that I have the Writers' block right now and cannot write anything new, I'll post some of my old poetry.

Denise

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2 posted 1999-12-30 09:41 PM

This is beautiful, Master, as lovely as the first time I read it! Thanks for reposting it!

Denise

Master
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3 posted 1999-12-30 09:57 PM

Thank you Denise, I consider this one to be one of my best.

Denise

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4 posted 1999-12-31 11:56 AM

This is one of my favorites of yours, as well! It is so full of passion and beauty!

Happy New Year, Master!

Denise

Master
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6 posted 1999-12-31 03:39 PM

Thanks again Denise and Happy New Years to you too!

The Keeper, this poem is about a poet seeing spring and capturing it on paper. When I write and it comes out good, I feel that raging passion.

Echo Rhayne
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7 posted 2000-01-01 11:19 AM

*clap clap clap* Very good, and I don't recall seeing it the first time around, so thanks for reposting =o)

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Master
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8 posted 2000-01-01 03:06 PM

Thank you Echo Rhane. Happy New Years! Isn't it nice to see "2000" on your computer screen?

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