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Spring sprung (another old poem)

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Master
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0 posted 12-30-1999 03:29 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Spring sprung so unexpected
From melting snow
I stood in awe
Observed perfection of its flow
So flawlessly performed
Each pitch connected
Played by the notes
Reformed in form
So worthy of great words
And yet neglected
My soul alone became affected
Pecked by the rain
In gained commotion
Grain after grain
I drained emotion
In proper fashion
Gentle motion
In passing rage
And raging passion
Unto the page

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Master
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1 posted 12-30-1999 06:47 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I wrote this one a while ago, but since it seems that I have the Writers' block right now and cannot write anything new, I'll post some of my old poetry.
Denise
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2 posted 12-30-1999 09:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Master, as lovely as the first time I read it! Thanks for reposting it!  

 Denise

Master
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3 posted 12-30-1999 09:57 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you Denise, I consider this one to be one of my best.
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4 posted 12-31-1999 11:56 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is one of my favorites of yours, as well! It is so full of passion and beauty!

Happy New Year, Master!

 Denise

Master
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6 posted 12-31-1999 03:39 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks again Denise and Happy New Years to you too!

The Keeper, this poem is about a poet seeing spring and capturing it on paper. When I write and it comes out good, I feel that raging passion.
Echo Rhayne
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7 posted 01-01-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

*clap clap clap*  Very good, and I don't recall seeing it the first time around, so thanks for reposting =o)


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Master
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8 posted 01-01-2000 03:06 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you Echo Rhane. Happy New Years! Isn't it nice to see "2000" on your computer screen?
 
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