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TomS
Junior Member

since 1999-12-18

Posts 32

0 posted 1999-12-30 02:09 PM

The Knowing

My minds eye holds pictures
Clearly as the day
A young woman of lovely features
Before love seeped away

Once solid as granite
How could it so dissolve
Was in the taking for granted
My lack of clear resolve

For I did not know then
What I now know
I would never be forgiven
For stemming your loves flow

I have reaped
As I have sown
When death up to you sneaked
In my presence you felt alone

Was then you became hard
And I realized
My hand held not the card
Nor the love in your eyes

I still remember
My heart still fells the shame
Like the winds of December
How I blew out the flame

jaxjoy
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 112
Texas

1 posted 1999-12-30 03:23 PM

nice work......I especially liked the first
stanza.

Tamera
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 121

2 posted 1999-12-30 06:04 PM

So sad and beautiful..
I enjoyed this...my can definitely feel it..
Tamera

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

3 posted 1999-12-30 07:48 PM

Very nicely written, beautiful and sad. I especially like the last few lines.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-12-30 09:57 PM

Yes, this is sad and beautiful! Well done, again, Tom!

Denise

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 1999-12-30 10:33 PM

Beautiful work So sad , Well done

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-12-30 10:53 PM

Touching

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

7 posted 1999-12-30 10:55 PM

How sad. I can connect with this one. Very lovely, very beautiful.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

8 posted 2000-01-01 07:25 AM

Beautiful!!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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