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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-30 11:19 AM



Promise me,
You'll never leave me,
Promise me,
You 'll love me
Till the end of time,
Promise me that our love shall never part,
Promise you'll take my hand and love me,
I promise you,
I won't leave lonely,
I'll love you,
Till the end ,
And now you must make a promise to me,
That you'll  love me
Till the end of time,
Promise me you'll try to love me,
As long as we live,
Promise me you'll never make me cry,
Cause our love is strong
And I know our love 'll stay ,
As long as as we won't get part,
Will you promise me?


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 01-01-2000).]

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whiskey
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1 posted 1999-12-30 10:51 PM


Wonderful !  


(There is a typo)

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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2 posted 2000-01-01 07:22 AM


Very beautiful poem, I hope the person you wrote this for promises you =o)

(hint, the typo is in the last Promise me YOU'LL)

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


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