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Promise me

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vandana
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0 posted 12-30-1999 11:19 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Promise me,
You'll never leave me,
Promise me,
You 'll love me
Till the end of time,
Promise me that our love shall never part,
Promise you'll take my hand and love me,
I promise you,
I won't leave lonely,
I'll love you,
Till the end ,
And now you must make a promise to me,
That you'll  love me
Till the end of time,
Promise me you'll try to love me,
As long as we live,
Promise me you'll never make me cry,
Cause our love is strong
And I know our love 'll stay ,
As long as as we won't get part,
Will you promise me?


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 01-01-2000).]
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1 posted 12-30-1999 10:51 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful !  


(There is a typo)
Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 01-01-2000 07:22 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Very beautiful poem, I hope the person you wrote this for promises you =o)

(hint, the typo is in the last Promise me YOU'LL)

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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