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whiskey
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0 posted 1999-12-30 10:55 AM


"      Answers     "

Give us the creed to believe
In the lust of the night
Trust in the night to bring forth
A morn that explains our
Lumped heap of expression

The reason why we cry for relief
From the rain of hate, above yourself
We still receive in little ways
The things of kindness


© Copyright 1999 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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1 posted 1999-12-30 11:10 AM


Thoughtful.  
whiskey
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2 posted 1999-12-30 11:03 PM


Thank you  
Astraea
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3 posted 1999-12-30 11:04 PM


Me like.  It's very lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 2000-01-01 07:30 AM


Yes, very lovely!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


whiskey
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5 posted 2000-01-01 08:47 AM


Thank you once again  
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2000-01-01 09:02 AM


You write from a refreshing point of view
Liz

Paul Hoekman
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7 posted 2000-01-03 02:05 AM


Another good one.
      Paul

Tamera
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8 posted 2000-01-03 05:11 PM


Whiskey, well done!  
Tamera

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