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littleJas
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since 1999-12-22
Posts 39
Australia

0 posted 1999-12-30 10:45 AM


To You
                                  
Entangled in a love made before birth
Knowledge of a feeling, too strong to explain
A deep thought of a dream coming true
A special moment ready to be lived
A look of fulfillment in a second glance
A connection of two hearts now one
A completion, the missing half now found

The sensation as a touch is shared
The warmth of a kiss given and taken
The words I love you meant from the soul
As to you I give myself


© Copyright 1999 Jasmine Elkwood - All Rights Reserved
Tamera
Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121

1 posted 1999-12-30 06:37 PM


Beautiful and touching...
Tamera

Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
2 posted 1999-12-30 10:24 PM


  You coul almost call this Soul Mate,
it reminds me of my wife and I.
               Thanks, Paul

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 2000-01-01 07:03 AM


Beautiful, you captured it quit nicely!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-01-01 12:41 PM


'Entangled in a love made before birth'

Wonderful poem!  I believe that we find the one we are destined to be with...despite detours, I believe we eventually find them!

 Denise


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-01-01 12:57 PM


This is very sweet...nice sentiments  
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