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littleJas
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since 12-22-1999
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Australia


0 posted 12-30-1999 10:45 AM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

To You
                                  
Entangled in a love made before birth
Knowledge of a feeling, too strong to explain
A deep thought of a dream coming true
A special moment ready to be lived
A look of fulfillment in a second glance
A connection of two hearts now one
A completion, the missing half now found

The sensation as a touch is shared
The warmth of a kiss given and taken
The words I love you meant from the soul
As to you I give myself

© Copyright 1999 Jasmine Elkwood - All Rights Reserved
Tamera
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1 posted 12-30-1999 06:37 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Beautiful and touching...
Tamera
Paul Hoekman
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2 posted 12-30-1999 10:24 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

  You coul almost call this Soul Mate,
it reminds me of my wife and I.
               Thanks, Paul
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 01-01-2000 07:03 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautiful, you captured it quit nicely!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Denise
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4 posted 01-01-2000 12:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

'Entangled in a love made before birth'

Wonderful poem!  I believe that we find the one we are destined to be with...despite detours, I believe we eventually find them!

 Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA


5 posted 01-01-2000 12:57 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is very sweet...nice sentiments  
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