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adam
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0 posted 12-30-1999 06:28 AM       View Profile for adam   Email adam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for adam



once, as i traveled under heavy
dark clouds.

i heard a feint voice,and it grew
ever loud.

it sang me a song,about my regret

and whispered of people, that i have not met

it kept love in my heart,through
out my dark time.

soon the clouds broke apart,and the sun started to shine.

          by
         Adam  Clarke  Roberts


 
© Copyright 1999 Adam Clarke Roberts - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 12-30-1999 08:02 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is great Adam, but was ahrd to read cause of the color!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

U K Hero
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2 posted 12-30-1999 08:29 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

capitals aside, I thought this was a tremendous piece

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whiskey
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3 posted 12-30-1999 08:48 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Beautiful poem Adam so hard to read the colour so light ,
Mike
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4 posted 01-08-2000 05:29 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Enjoyed.  Nice poem.
Betty Gravitt
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5 posted 01-08-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Adam I like the poem. Never stop trying.

 B Gravitt

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 01-08-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Adam -
I found this to be lovely.
Absolutely touching.
Keep it up.
Welcome to the doors of Passion's.
Enter often.
Love ~Marge~
 
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