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adam
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since 1999-12-28
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0 posted 1999-12-30 06:28 AM




once, as i traveled under heavy
dark clouds.

i heard a feint voice,and it grew
ever loud.

it sang me a song,about my regret

and whispered of people, that i have not met

it kept love in my heart,through
out my dark time.

soon the clouds broke apart,and the sun started to shine.

          by
         Adam  Clarke  Roberts


 

© Copyright 1999 Adam Clarke Roberts - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-12-30 08:02 AM


This is great Adam, but was ahrd to read cause of the color!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


U K Hero
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since 1999-08-08
Posts 266
England
2 posted 1999-12-30 08:29 AM


capitals aside, I thought this was a tremendous piece

[This message has been edited by U K Hero (edited 12-30-1999).]

whiskey
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3 posted 1999-12-30 08:48 AM


Beautiful poem Adam so hard to read the colour so light ,
Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

4 posted 2000-01-08 05:29 PM


Enjoyed.  Nice poem.
Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
Posts 222
Georgia United States
5 posted 2000-01-08 08:09 PM


Adam I like the poem. Never stop trying.

 B Gravitt


Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-01-08 08:24 PM


Adam -
I found this to be lovely.
Absolutely touching.
Keep it up.
Welcome to the doors of Passion's.
Enter often.
Love ~Marge~

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