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Things to say and hear

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highwayman
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since 12-29-1999
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Cookeville, Tennessee, usa


0 posted 12-30-1999 03:17 AM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

There are a great many things,
That I must say to you,
But were do I start,
And will you believe them true.
They come from my heart,
And from my soul,
And I must tell you soon,
For thats my only goal.
And when you hear,
What I whisper in your ear,
Please stay with me,
Becouse it's all sincere.
I love you so much,
And theres a whole lot more,
But where do I begin,
To keep from being a bore.
And now that I've got you,
I've all the time I need,
For you to hear these things,
As my heart bleeds.
And with this said,
Our love can grow more,
And with you in my arms,
My heart can soar!


 
© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 12-30-1999 04:42 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very lovely  
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


2 posted 12-30-1999 07:36 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

How sweet!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Meadowmuse
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since 12-27-1999
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3 posted 12-30-1999 11:40 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This poignant piece tugs at the heart. Its simple presentation makes it believable.
Astraea
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since 11-09-1999
Posts 397
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm


4 posted 12-30-1999 11:45 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Simple and really lovely.  Very beautiful.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Balladeer
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5 posted 12-30-1999 11:47 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Nicely done.
whiskey
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since 12-28-1999
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6 posted 12-30-1999 11:49 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Beautiful , I love this one  
highwayman
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Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa


7 posted 01-01-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

Thanks evaryone for all the feedback
Red
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since 01-01-2000
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8 posted 01-01-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Red   Email Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Red

Damn, I really got to meet the guys who post poetry here... I never knew that men could be so sweet.lol  Excellent poem, very touching!  
highwayman
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since 12-29-1999
Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa


9 posted 01-05-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

Thanks Red. you know that anyone can be this nice if they want to be.lol
Denise
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10 posted 01-05-2000 10:55 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice! I enjoyed this!

 Denise

Toerag
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since 07-29-99
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Ala bam a


11 posted 01-05-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Hiway....nice job.....yanno? I was nice once, I just don't like to make a habit of it...
passing shadows
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12 posted 08-16-2004 12:38 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

pretty write
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