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A hole heart

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highwayman
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since 12-29-1999
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Cookeville, Tennessee, usa


0 posted 12-30-1999 03:04 AM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

I gave you my love,
When I gave you my heart,
And it had all the pieces,
Right from the start.
But when you gave it back,
I noticed some holes,
Did you keep those parts,
For your own little goals?
If thats the case,
I want them back,
So I can be whole,
And know how to act.
You've still got my love
And you've still got those parts,
If you'll take me back,
You can have back my heart.
You can give or take,
But eather way you go,
I want to be happy,
I want my heart whole.


 
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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 12-30-1999 04:45 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I like the idea behind this one...I'm not sure our heart can ever be totally whole again after being broken though
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


2 posted 12-30-1999 07:37 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Im with Ruth on this one!

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

whiskey
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3 posted 12-30-1999 08:35 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful poem , Ive not seen this one before  
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