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highwayman
Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa

0 posted 1999-12-30 03:04 AM


I gave you my love,
When I gave you my heart,
And it had all the pieces,
Right from the start.
But when you gave it back,
I noticed some holes,
Did you keep those parts,
For your own little goals?
If thats the case,
I want them back,
So I can be whole,
And know how to act.
You've still got my love
And you've still got those parts,
If you'll take me back,
You can have back my heart.
You can give or take,
But eather way you go,
I want to be happy,
I want my heart whole.


 

© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-12-30 04:45 AM


I like the idea behind this one...I'm not sure our heart can ever be totally whole again after being broken though
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 1999-12-30 07:37 AM


Im with Ruth on this one!

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278
Australia
3 posted 1999-12-30 08:35 AM


Wonderful poem , Ive not seen this one before  
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