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don't fall

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jenn991013
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0 posted 12-30-1999 01:09 AM       View Profile for jenn991013   Email jenn991013   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jenn991013


how should i say this?
there is only one way
i was right
maybe i didn't want to see you
the way that you are
mabye i knew all along
but i just didn't want it to be true
mabye that's why i didn't let go
and didn't get hurt
or maybe
   just maybe
       i was only lucky i didn't
                fall
                   to
                    hard
                       in
                        love
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Michael
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1 posted 12-30-1999 01:11 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well, if you didn't fall enough to get hurt, I certainly don't think it was love you fell into...just my view, like the poem anyway, though.


michael
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2 posted 12-30-1999 01:15 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Very nice.  I liked it.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

whiskey
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3 posted 12-30-1999 01:22 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Love is a powerful thing , I agree if you didnt get hurt was it really love,  Good poem  
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 12-30-1999 01:46 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ah, the falling can sometimes be the best part...just make sure you have someplace soft to land  
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 12-30-1999 06:40 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I must agree with Michael, Whiskey and Hoot!  Good poem though!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

 
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