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~~~ Mio Amore Maria!~~~

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neitham
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since 12-29-1999
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India


0 posted 12-30-1999 12:01 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

For the woman who had brought so much joy to my life.
How do I begin, where do I begin, where will it all end?
Where does this overflowing cauldron of feelings flow to?
Do you feel the rhythm, can you feel the vibes?
Do you feel the way I feel?
Does your heart sings my poems?
What does your heart tell you?
Does your soul cry out for comfort?
What does your spirit seek?

Will you come away with me?
Travel with me across the timeless horizon?
Will you let me hold your hand, and will you stand by me?
Do you often think about us?

Have you ever looked at the stars and wished for my name?
Have you ever painted my picture across the empty sky?
Will you always love me the way that I do?
Do you believe in us?

Does it ever occur to you that I might not be a knight in a shining armor,
but an ordinary rider on steel horse with a rusted armor?
Will you still love me then?

                         

© Copyright 1999 JK.Neitham - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
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since 11-09-1999
Posts 397
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm


1 posted 12-30-1999 12:03 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Very lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Alwye
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In the space between moments


2 posted 12-30-1999 12:10 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very very beautiful work.  I love it.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
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3 posted 12-30-1999 12:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Now this is gorgeous, excellent!!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 12-30-1999 01:36 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I like this....and she'd be stupid not too  

"Does it ever occur to you that I might not be a knight in a shining armor,
but an ordinary rider on steel horse with a rusted armor?
Will you still love me then? "

Ah, when you really think about it...why would anyone want a knight in shinning armor. What did they do any way?....burn down villages and rape the women. Besides, that armor would be a bit cold to snuggle up to on a winter's night  

                    
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


5 posted 12-30-1999 06:30 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Very exquisite poem!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

neitham
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since 12-29-1999
Posts 44
India


6 posted 12-31-1999 03:51 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

Thanks guys for taking the time to give your comments on this poem! The fact is am still new and very nervous..not sure what to say, know what I mean?  
Anyway, this is one of my fav poem, dedicated to a chat fren who lives in Sweeden(btw, I am from India)..this was written in 5 minutes without any changes to the original thoughts...she did like it!  
PhaerieChild
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since 08-30-99
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Aloha, Oregon


7 posted 12-31-1999 04:19 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Very nicely written!! It speaks volumes to the heart.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

Denise
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8 posted 01-02-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Neitham! I enjoyed this very much!

 Denise

 
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