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Paradise

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agony
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0 posted 12-29-1999 11:11 PM       View Profile for agony   Email agony   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for agony



We are all born to start dying
the minute we enter this crazy world.For something once so
beautiful,that we humans have yet to discover,no pain,no suffering,
no sickness,or plagues,we are all dying at someone elses decision.
Our lives have been chosen and the paths we take were there before we had a choice to decide which path was right.So evil plagued our paradise,and now we have to choose our path,while
the EVIL romes the earth.
  
              Tracy Schlieper




 
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Astraea
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1 posted 12-29-1999 11:13 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

What a first poem...  Welcome to Passions!  But that was a lovely poem nonetheless.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

neitham
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2 posted 12-29-1999 11:17 PM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

A cynical way of looking at the fact of life....philosophically..good attempt!
whiskey
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3 posted 12-29-1999 11:25 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Very Good , Welcome  
Paul Hoekman
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I understand what your saying and have felt this way before, forunately I've found life much more beautiful to concentrate on.
       I did sincerely enjoy it
                 Paul
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 12-30-1999 05:57 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Welcome to passions, and your poem is quite pulchritudinous!!!  What a way to enter!!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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