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Eternity

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neitham
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0 posted 12-29-1999 10:37 PM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

ETERNITY
In the heat of the long day.
When longing for  the night is nigh.
In the color of mediocrity.
Where attention find I not.
Through the dark clustered sky.
When not a star shine in my life.
And million faces in the crowd.
Wherein, failed I to see one distinct.
All that my vision could behold.
Your visage everywhere I turn to.
Where have thou been, my love, my all?
Have in thine thought thou forsaken me?
All my life, Spend I, awaiting your ruturn.
Took you, what? A hundred years?
Time I remember, wondered ever I.
For, your return knew not I.
Heard your voice just the other day.
Know not I what to make of it.
What a fool have I been.
Where could you ever be but.
Here with me, here in my heart.
Eternity my love, thats my prayer!

© Copyright 1999 JK.Neitham - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 12-29-1999 10:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Neitham. Lovely poem.

 Denise


Astraea
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Welcome to Passions!  That's very touching.  Truly lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

whiskey
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3 posted 12-29-1999 10:53 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Welcome to a new member like myself, Beautiful words  
neitham
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4 posted 12-29-1999 11:08 PM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

WOW!!! It sure feels good to be so lovingly accepted in the family...Thanks everyone  
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 12-30-1999 05:49 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Welcome to the family, and you entered in with a beauty of a poem!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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