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Eternity |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
ETERNITY In the heat of the long day. When longing for the night is nigh. In the color of mediocrity. Where attention find I not. Through the dark clustered sky. When not a star shine in my life. And million faces in the crowd. Wherein, failed I to see one distinct. All that my vision could behold. Your visage everywhere I turn to. Where have thou been, my love, my all? Have in thine thought thou forsaken me? All my life, Spend I, awaiting your ruturn. Took you, what? A hundred years? Time I remember, wondered ever I. For, your return knew not I. Heard your voice just the other day. Know not I what to make of it. What a fool have I been. Where could you ever be but. Here with me, here in my heart. Eternity my love, thats my prayer! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Neitham. Lovely poem. Denise |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Welcome to Passions! That's very touching. Truly lovely. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Welcome to a new member like myself, Beautiful words  |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
WOW!!! It sure feels good to be so lovingly accepted in the family...Thanks everyone  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Welcome to the family, and you entered in with a beauty of a poem! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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