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Gemini
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0 posted 12-29-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gemini

There was someone in my life that I dearly miss and lost through the act of an unkind word and an unkind deed.  He was my mentor and friend and I think of him every day.  He told me he got through the Vietnam war years by believing and having a guardian angel.

If there is one wish left in this heart of mine.
I wish our guardian angels could've danced together.
Just one dance, a slow one, together.
Our angels would've danced all night in each others arms. My angel would've gazed in your guardian angels piercing blue eyes, and would've fallen in love, as I did with you.
The other guardian angel's all gathered around and looking down from the Heavens would've been jealous of our steps, firm and nimble in unison and perfection.  
And for one fleeting moment, we would've been together and it wouldn't have mattered if we belonged to anyone else.
Your guardian angels steps would've been gentle like you, you float with the air of confidence and pride.
My guardian angel would've been proud to be in your guardian angels arms and I think she would've hung on forever and never have let him go!  


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Denise
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1 posted 12-29-1999 10:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Gemini. And sad.

 Denise


Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 12-30-1999 05:25 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautiful and sweet yet sad

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 01-16-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Gemini I enjoyed reading this...maybe your guardian angels will meet again someday.....to dance all night in each other arms...to slowly dance the night away. Hey..there's always hope.   James
Justbleu
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4 posted 01-16-2000 09:04 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This is such a sweet poem, but sad!!  I like it though!!  I love angels!!  

Thanks!!
Take Care
Bridgette
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5 posted 01-16-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Gemini-
What a beautiful piece from your heart.
I'd almost be willing to bet that he thinks of you too.  If there's anyway possible ...
see that he knows you regret the deeds that separated you.
Friends that close ... shouldn't part.
My best wishes to you.
This is truly beautiful !
~*Marge*~

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devina
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6 posted 01-16-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Always keep hope, that you will reunite one day!  And remember that God works in mysterious ways...this was beautiful!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
 
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