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Dawn's Promise (Repost for Deb Lynne)

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Denise
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The tranquil dawn wakes quietly
And whispers ever so gently;
So softly she speaks her promise
Yet promises nothing – but this:
Another day – another chance
To work, to play, to sing, to dance;
To rise and greet the Master’s call;
Meet challenges that face us all;
Another day to grow to love
-be more like Him who reigns above;
For anyone who cares to see
A wealth of opportunity
Arrives with each new dawning day
-be skies quite clear or gloomy gray;
So graciously she gives to all
The rich, the poor, the great, the small;
Without regard to circumstance
She ever gives – another chance.



8/99




 Denise




[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-01-2000).]
© Copyright 1999 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Eloise
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1 posted 12-29-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Wow Denise, this is beautiful!  
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I love it, Denise. What a talent you are!
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Thank you, Eloise and Balladeer for your kind comments!  

 Denise


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4 posted 12-30-1999 05:47 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Bravo!! This is exquisite!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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Denise, This poem just flew right by me!
It is absolutely beautiful. you have a special talent, my dear
Liz
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Beautiful.  But what makes you so sure it's a she?  
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Echo, Eliazabeth and Rob! I'm glad you all liked it!    

Rob- I don't have a clue!   hehehehe
...'she' just sounded 'softer' than 'it' or 'he'!

 Denise

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Beautiful
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Beautiful
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Thanks Ruth!  

 Denise

 
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