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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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0 posted 1999-12-29 08:17 PM


I never had this feeling before
I never wanted anyone more
And something in your eyes tells me
You feel the way that I do
I feel like you do (or did)

If you would like to stay here all night
You know that I would say it’s all right
Though I’m saying, “Yes”
I confess I’ve got more on my mind
Cause I want more of you than your time

All of you, your body and soul
Every kind of love you can express
All the secret dreams you’ve never told
I want everything and I’ll take nothing less

All of you as long as you live
Everything you’ve never shared before
I want all of you that you can give
All your joys and all your sorrows
Your todays and your tomorrows

How I long to feel the warmth of your touch
And then if I’m not asking too much
I’d like to spend my life wandering through
All the wonders of you

And when we’re lying close in the dark
So close I feel each beat of your heart
I want you to reveal what you feel
All you hold deep inside
There is nothing I want you to hide

All of you, your body and soul
Everything you want this love to be
I want all of you, all that you can give
And in return for all you’re giving
Let me give you all of me

All of you, your body and soul
Every kind of love you can express
All the secret dreams you’ve never told
I want everything

All of you as long as you live
Everything you want this love to be
I want all of you, all that you can give
In return I want to give you
Let me give you
All of me!

Such beautiful music to the soul, such beautiful dreams.....

Julio Iglesias & Diana Ross..(perfect)


 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.


© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
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1 posted 1999-12-29 08:18 PM


Another lovely one.  Beautifully written.

~Astraea


 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


cjs9853
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since 1999-11-26
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2 posted 1999-12-29 09:36 PM


beautiful if i could make a wish come true for you,it would be for you to have the man of your dreams i sure would like to hear that song
Balladeer
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3 posted 1999-12-29 10:04 PM


WHEW!! Don't beat around the bush, Rainbow. What is it that you want?

This is very excellent writing, Cindy.

Denise
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4 posted 1999-12-29 10:08 PM


Yes, very beautiful!

 Denise



Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 1999-12-30 05:30 AM


You want what???  Don't we all LOL, prefectly said!!!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-12-30 05:46 AM


Wow..........I can see dancing to that one amoung other things .....oops, sorry that slipped out....LOL   Nice one
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
7 posted 1999-12-30 10:10 AM


I'm glad that I didn't miss this passionate and beautiful piece!!  
Love this Rainbow!!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
Posts 222
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8 posted 1999-12-30 10:19 AM


You ask so beautifully too. Wonderful RainbowGirl.

 B Gravitt



whiskey
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9 posted 1999-12-30 10:22 AM


Wonderful so beautiful  
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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10 posted 1999-12-30 10:36 AM


Rainbow,
Did you know that Julio is in love with me?
He is, He implied it in "Me Olvide de Vivir"
, he's just been too busy on the road.Oh, well, I'll just have to wait,
Now getting back to your poem, is this a song you heard or did you write this?
It is beautiful!
Either way,Rainbow, you are a woman of my own heart and soul, wish we lived closer so I could get to know you.
Liz  

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
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Southern Abstentia
11 posted 1999-12-30 02:56 PM


Heart HuggsZ!!
caroline
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12 posted 1999-12-30 03:56 PM


Simply fabulous, Rainbow!  



 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



Tamera
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 121

13 posted 1999-12-30 06:00 PM


Rainbow,
This is so beautiful...I don't even know you, but I want this for you...

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