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whiskey
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0 posted 1999-12-29 08:16 PM


    " Sleep "

I sit and stare
My love lies there
I watch you sleep
My eyes you keep
Happy within
Showing without
Breath exhale
Look so pale
Dream you see
Is it of me
A smile I seek
My name you speak
I sit and stare
As you lay there
Open eyes
A gentle sigh
Kiss to me
My love to Thee



© Copyright 1999 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
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1 posted 1999-12-29 08:17 PM


Lovely....  Another nice one.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


whiskey
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2 posted 1999-12-29 11:36 PM


Thankyou  
devina
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3 posted 1999-12-30 02:24 AM


Isn't it wonderful to know that something so simple can reveal one's love ten times over?  Wonderful poem, and I don't think that I've welcomed you properly(a little late!)  But welcome none-the-less!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 1999-12-30 06:56 AM


Simply and beautifully said!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


whiskey
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5 posted 1999-12-30 10:59 PM


Thank you devina and echo ,  
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