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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 1999-12-29 05:31 PM


Just musing at the gray skies
Feeling little i made a fist
Swinging swinging swinging
But for nothing i always missed

I went running in for a ladder
Childhood freedom takes me high
Most ladders only have five wrungs
But this one reached up to the sky

On my journey i had brought up
A light bulb of a billion watts
But there the sun i looked too long
And now all i see are dots

If there's a moral to the story
The connection between the dots
If the sky is mostly cloudy
Might just be your dreary thoughts



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-29-1999).]

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caroline
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1 posted 1999-12-29 06:32 PM


Oh yuh!!!!   You are right about this Walt! Good one...love your style, ya know!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



Paul Hoekman
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2 posted 1999-12-29 06:49 PM


I enjoyed this, simply fun!
                Paul

Nan
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3 posted 1999-12-29 07:31 PM


Sometimes you need a ladder that goes "wayout", ya know???  
whiskey
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4 posted 1999-12-29 07:43 PM


Great style , wonderful  

Julie

Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 1999-12-30 04:08 AM


Oh yuh???  WEll, I agree!!  Great poem!!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-12-30 05:57 AM


Oh yuh??? You don't say? We'll I tend to agree with your cloudy thoughts on this one   Smiling, nicely done Walt  
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 1999-12-30 08:44 AM


Oh Yuh!! thanky yuh all ...caroline miss talkin to yuh hooty thank yuh and all the rest big lovable rasberries on thuh bottom
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