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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 12-29-1999 05:31 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

Just musing at the gray skies
Feeling little i made a fist
Swinging swinging swinging
But for nothing i always missed

I went running in for a ladder
Childhood freedom takes me high
Most ladders only have five wrungs
But this one reached up to the sky

On my journey i had brought up
A light bulb of a billion watts
But there the sun i looked too long
And now all i see are dots

If there's a moral to the story
The connection between the dots
If the sky is mostly cloudy
Might just be your dreary thoughts



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-29-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 12-29-1999 06:32 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Oh yuh!!!!   You are right about this Walt! Good one...love your style, ya know!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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2 posted 12-29-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

I enjoyed this, simply fun!
                Paul
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3 posted 12-29-1999 07:31 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sometimes you need a ladder that goes "wayout", ya know???  
whiskey
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4 posted 12-29-1999 07:43 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Great style , wonderful  

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5 posted 12-30-1999 04:08 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Oh yuh???  WEll, I agree!!  Great poem!!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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Oh yuh??? You don't say? We'll I tend to agree with your cloudy thoughts on this one   Smiling, nicely done Walt  
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7 posted 12-30-1999 08:44 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

Oh Yuh!! thanky yuh all ...caroline miss talkin to yuh hooty thank yuh and all the rest big lovable rasberries on thuh bottom
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