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More Precious than Gold
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More Precious than Gold |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Well, I was going to save this one. . . but I couldn't wait any longer. . . This poem is dedicated to Michael and poetFemmeFatale. . . they have been both an inspiration and a blessing to me and this is just a small thank you to both of them and my wish that they be happy. . . From out of the Darkness came his soul Searching for someone to make him whole A Poet by trade A man of gentle ways A man on whose heart time and love had taken their toll. She was a woman, graceful and refined A true Femme Fatale, it could not be denied A woman of Passion But, behind the fashion Was a woman who had spent nights alone, and cried. Theirs is a story just beginning to be told Another chapter in the book of love so old Together this day Now and for always They have shown us a love more precious than gold. ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sigh ill never have that moment back when i first met my aol sweetheart now we are married yuh yuh it is precious the people and the circumstances yuh |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a beautiful tribute. Very well done indeed Sven.  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A beautiful wish and tribute Sven At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful tribute, Sven. I know that Michael and Femme Fetale are going to love this! Nathan |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful Sven , beautiful words |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is wonderful Sven, a wonderful poem for 2 wonderful people! I send my wish that they be happy as well!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sven...this is a truly wonderful posting about two fo passions favorites. We have watched their love grow and blossum through their poetry for one another. You have portrayed that well in your words |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice Sven - This is quite a fitting tribute - These are two of the best people I know - If the truth be told..... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A beautiful tribute to two beautiful people! Very lovely, Sven! Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh wow Sven, I don't even know what to say...You had left me the message that you had written something for us, and I found it here tonight....I wasn't expecting something so beautifully & delicately crafted - what a pleasant surprise! I am really honored that we have had this much of an impact on you, to inspire a piece such as this.....I know Michael will love it...I'll let him know he needs to stop by and see this! I myself have been in awe at what Michael and I share...It just flows effortlessly from us...through us. We had both pretty much given up on finding one to complete us...and then one day, magic started happening, from out of nowhere....The rest is history! We were just swept away - - Thank you so much for this lovely tribute! I can't find words to show my gratitude... *** curtsies And thank you for this added bit of encouragement....Gennifer - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wanted to read this again lovely Sven. Happy New Year my dear friend At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I apologize it took me so long to find this, Sven. Thank you so much. I am honored by your words and glad to have had (with Gen) such an impact on you. You're right, the story is just beginning, here's to many more great chapters lying ahead. God bless you, and Happy New Year. Michael |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . as always, you words mean so much to me. . . Michael, Gen. . . I am so glad that both of you liked this. . . it's so wonderful to see two people like yourselves come together. I wish both of you a long and happy life together. . . you deserve it. . .and each other. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A perfect tribute, eloquently stated.. Wonderful Sven.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A beautiful tribute and poem Sven. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful tribute Sven for 2 beautiful people, Well Done Sven. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
What a wonderful gift Sven....and done with heart Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you" |
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Mary Junior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 38Delaware, Ohio, USA |
A beautiful tribute Sven. I too wish Gen and Michael all the best. |
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