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Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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0 posted 1999-12-29 04:20 PM


In this pleasant dream of mine,
She had wings of gold.
But I didn't know the meaning.
For I was never told.

She helped so many from all walks of life.
But especially to those in need.
On tireless wings she fluttered about.
Performing many deeds.

With the morning light I did awake.
I felt so peaceful and serene.
And I wonder if I'll see you again
When I close my eyes to dream.


© Copyright 1999 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 1999-12-29 04:42 PM


Our dreams speak to us even when we are awake. . .

Wonderful words my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Balladeer
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2 posted 1999-12-29 04:59 PM


There are people who fit that description....and the world is nicer because of them. Very nucely done, Eloise.
Eloise
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3 posted 1999-12-29 09:01 PM


Thank you Sven, how true that is.

Balladeer, how right you are and many of them are right here in this forum. Thanks.

Denise
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4 posted 1999-12-29 09:03 PM


This is so beautiful, Eloise! I love it!

 Denise



Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA
5 posted 1999-12-30 04:49 AM


This is beautiful!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-12-30 04:58 AM


Very beautiful  
Nan
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7 posted 1999-12-30 09:52 AM


Nicely done, indeed...

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