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The Gift You Have Given

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destiny502
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0 posted 12-29-1999 01:22 PM       View Profile for destiny502   Email destiny502   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for destiny502

My dear beloved friend
have you brought this gift to me
a gift of love everlasting
from the beautiful
heavens
of where you have gone so far away
from me?
did I recieve this treasure as a good-bye gift from you?
a forever good-bye
that tore my heart in two
did you bring me this beautiful love
to mend my heart?
to show me light?
to end my fear?
my heart will never mend
with you gone away
the light cant shine as bright
without you by my side
the fear will not disappear
even if you were here.
but the love i have
a gift as you left
has forever changed my life
and I thank you for that my dear beloved friend.


please give your comments..this is kinda rough.
© Copyright 1999 Heather - All Rights Reserved
Tamera
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1 posted 12-29-1999 01:36 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Friendship is a gift, a friendship like this is wonderful, and it leaves you with memories so precious..great poem!
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2 posted 12-29-1999 01:53 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I know how you feel...this is beautiful!
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 12-30-1999 03:06 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautiful!


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4 posted 12-30-1999 03:12 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful , Friendship is a beautiful thing  
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