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highwayman
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since 12-29-1999
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Cookeville, Tennessee, usa


0 posted 12-29-1999 01:16 PM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

,Oh my goodness
Oh me oh my,
I have this feeling ,
That I'm going tho die.
I don't really know,
The reason why,
It comes through my ears,
My nose, and eyes.
It hurts my head,
And hurts my heart,
It hurts all over,
Every time I start.
It's of that emotion,
The one called love,
Thats the bad thing,
That I speak of.
The reason that,
I think I'll die,
Is becouse I lack it,
And I don't know why.
It's hard to say,
Just when it left me,
I can't point it out,
I can't even see.
I think she took it,
On that day,
When shee left my side,
And went away.                    
© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Tamera
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since 12-28-1999
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1 posted 12-29-1999 01:45 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

sad...no one can take your love though, it is inside of you..it shows through your words..
whiskey
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2 posted 12-29-1999 07:17 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Very sad poem, But love you have I know ,
Good work  
Isis
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since 09-06-99
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3 posted 12-29-1999 08:04 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

"And the highwayman comes riding up to the old inn door"  couldn't resist that with the song I love and all.
That particular love may be gone, by the light of your love is always within, just waiting to shine again.  Never fear, it is still there, it may just be a bit wounded at present  

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
Posts 1538
Canyon Country, CA


4 posted 12-30-1999 04:15 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Sad, but you captured your emotions greatly!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


5 posted 12-30-1999 05:21 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very sad, but know the feeling  
Meadowmuse
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6 posted 12-30-1999 11:37 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Cleverly crafted, this piece, and the disjointed ending is perfect.
Astraea
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Posts 397
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm


7 posted 12-30-1999 11:47 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Very lovely, if sad.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

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