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Paul Hoekman
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0 posted 12-29-1999 01:16 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

  I had a dream
just the other day
we were flying around
in my fathers plane.

  Down to the shore
we plunged into the sea
found a big old whale
asked about a manatee
before it could answer heard a whaling ship
then tale turned it faded away,the final words that we heard "I really don't want to die today".

  We banked around some coral right through a school of whispering fish, heard something about an octopus and a whales dying wish.

  We broke the surface headed straight for the sky, landed on Mars just to watch the stars go by.

  But the air got thin so we headed home had no problem went through the ozone hole.

  We were flying around in my fathers plane tip top flip flop here we go again from the top the front drops and dives into the sea and straight up to the moon,be back to earth real soon. Just a little daydream.                              


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Paul Hoekman
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Shameless Return
Meadowmuse
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I enjoyed your daydream...the elements of sea and sky always pull at me, perhaps from my days as a mermaiden. {blink}
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 12-29-1999 07:29 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

You have a good imagination!

 Nathan
Astraea
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Very nice.  Daydreams are a nice thought.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

whiskey
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Wonderful Day dream, your Imagination must be strong  
Poet deVine
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Nice daydream!  
Nan
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Here ya go.... take another glide around.....
Echo Rhayne
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Hey ok, are you sneaking into my daydreams now??? LoL, So close to a few I have had =o)


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Paul Hoekman
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Alot of dreamin going on up here, had to come back to join them.
 
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