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Betty Gravitt
Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 222
Georgia United States

0 posted 1999-12-29 12:14 PM

We walked upon the beach
in the pale moonlight.
Held each other close,
beneath the stars that night.

We watched the sunrise
from the mountain top,
gave our love,
down to the last drop.

We walked in the morning dew,
made love as if it was the first time,
our love born anew.

We listened to the thunder,
as it brought about the storm.
Made love to match the lightning,
all firece, strong, and warm.

We walked beneath the october skies,
made love to match the wild
Autumn colors found there.

We watched the snowflakes fall,
on a cold winters day,
held each other tightly,
and loved the cold away.

We walked upon the beach,
my love and I,
and upon the beach,
we said good-bye.

B Gravitt

Richard
Junior Member

since 1999-12-27

Posts 35
California

1 posted 1999-12-29 01:16 PM

Stirring and felt with emotion. Thank you Betty

Tamera
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 121

2 posted 1999-12-29 01:48 PM

so many loves never to be forgotten..beautiful!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 1999-12-29 02:18 PM

Betty, have you been looking through my diaries? I have had all of the experiences that you describe here in your poem. . .

Your words are simply wonderful. . .thank you. . .

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

4 posted 1999-12-30 03:13 AM

This is truly beautiful!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

highwayman
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa

5 posted 1999-12-30 03:35 AM

Thats a sad ending it makes me wander what could happon to break up a love like that. I feel the pain, both in the words and in my own heart. well written

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

6 posted 1999-12-30 03:37 AM

I can connect with this one. Very lovely.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Betty Gravitt
Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 222
Georgia United States

7 posted 1999-12-30 08:51 AM

Richard, thank you for the read.

Tamera, gone but not ever forgotten.

Echo, thank you, and it was.

highwayman, life can sometimes deal a bad hand.

Astera, thank you.

Thank all of you for the read. Sorry about the slow reply.

B Gravitt

Betty Gravitt
Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 222
Georgia United States

8 posted 1999-12-30 08:56 AM

Sven, I think our diaries are a lot alike. We live, we love, we learn, then we write.

Thank you for the read. Sorry for the slow reply. Work you know.

B Gravitt

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