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My Love And I

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Betty Gravitt
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0 posted 12-29-1999 12:14 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Betty Gravitt

We walked upon the beach
in the pale moonlight.
Held each other close,
beneath the stars that night.

We watched the sunrise
from the mountain top,
gave our love,
down to the last drop.

We walked in the morning dew,
made love as if it was the first time,
our love born anew.

We listened to the thunder,
as it brought about the storm.
Made love to match the lightning,
all firece, strong, and warm.

We walked beneath the october skies,
made love to match the wild
Autumn colors found there.

We watched the snowflakes fall,
on a cold winters day,
held each other tightly,
and loved the cold away.

We walked upon the beach,
my love and I,
and upon the beach,
we said good-bye.




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Richard
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1 posted 12-29-1999 01:16 PM       View Profile for Richard   Email Richard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard

Stirring and felt with emotion. Thank you Betty
Tamera
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2 posted 12-29-1999 01:48 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

so many loves never to be forgotten..beautiful!  
Sven
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3 posted 12-29-1999 02:18 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Betty, have you been looking through my diaries?  I have had all of the experiences that you describe here in your poem. . .

Your words are simply wonderful. . .thank you. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 12-30-1999 03:13 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is truly beautiful!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

highwayman
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5 posted 12-30-1999 03:35 AM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

Thats a sad ending it makes me wander what could happon to break up a love like that.  I feel the pain, both in the words and in my own heart.  well written

 
Astraea
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6 posted 12-30-1999 03:37 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

I can connect with this one.  Very lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Betty Gravitt
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7 posted 12-30-1999 08:51 AM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Richard, thank you for the read.

Tamera, gone but not ever forgotten.  

Echo, thank you, and it was.

highwayman, life can sometimes deal a bad hand.

Astera, thank you.

Thank all of you for the read. Sorry about the slow reply.


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Betty Gravitt
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8 posted 12-30-1999 08:56 AM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Sven, I think our diaries are a lot alike. We live, we love, we learn, then we write.  

Thank you for the read. Sorry for the slow reply. Work you know.


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