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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 1999-12-29 11:50 AM


I'm lyning down beside his body
next to mine,
He's loving me,
He loving me than before,
None can stand beside him,
He's giving all the love
he has for me tonight,
Today,
It's so right

to have him in my arms,
He's so right to have me in his arms,
Stars are so bright ,
I can feel his hand on mine,
Loving me so tenderly,

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Richard
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 35
California
1 posted 1999-12-29 11:54 AM


Not hard to see the feelings here. Nicely done.
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 1999-12-30 03:03 AM


Expressive, can feel the emotion


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