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whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 1999-12-29 09:38 AM

"A crying soul"

Lost to me
I can not see
Just what it is
That lost your kiss
Did I stray
Not to this day
No more song
To you I'm gone
Past in time
No more to find
Without you near
No more cheer
An empty space
A frowning face
Left to repair
A heart's despair
Not to stay
Myself this way
Lost to you
Inside Im blue
No sun I see
Dark to me
Feeling gloom
The loss of you

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

1 posted 1999-12-29 09:46 AM

very good, I like this....course I am feeling gloomy, so it suits me well.....sigh

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

2 posted 1999-12-29 07:23 PM

Thanks Iloveit , I hope your gloom subsides and you feel happiness again soon

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 1999-12-29 07:46 PM

Sad poem and good job of it too. Welcome to Passions and you're very pretty too!

Nathan

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

4 posted 1999-12-29 07:50 PM

I like it! Very lovely.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 1999-12-29 07:54 PM

So sad for the soul, but remember there is always more love and happiness just around the corner

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

6 posted 1999-12-29 07:56 PM

Thank you for your kind words

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 12-29-1999).]

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

7 posted 1999-12-30 04:13 AM

Great poem Whiskey! Sad, but great!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

8 posted 1999-12-31 12:24 PM

I really enjoy your style, very unique,
very deep yet to the point.
Paul

destiny502
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 57
OH

9 posted 1999-12-31 03:05 PM

wonderful poem as always!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

10 posted 2000-01-01 07:11 PM

A sad yet beautiful poem!

Denise

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

11 posted 2000-01-05 10:00 PM

Very good, bittersweet and touching.

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

12 posted 2000-01-05 11:16 PM

Great poem Whiskey - sad but it seems to suit my mood lol ( you read the poem that I posted) Hey, Moonshine Whiskey - lol we'd be illegal in some states of America lol

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

13 posted 2000-01-06 03:09 AM

Thanks to everyone for all your nice replies

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

14 posted 2000-01-06 03:44 AM

Whiskey, this is very sad and very beautiful!!

What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

neitham
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
India

15 posted 2000-01-06 04:03 AM

Whiskey,

Very crisp, very beautifully written and u look simply divine

Admiringly,
neitham

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

16 posted 2000-01-06 04:19 AM

Thank you Dark angel

Thanks Neithem you flatter me

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