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A crying soul

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whiskey
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0 posted 12-29-1999 09:38 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

"A crying soul"

Lost to me
I can not see
Just what it is
That lost your kiss
Did I stray
Not to this day
No more song
To you I'm gone
Past in time
No more to find
Without you near
No more cheer
An empty space
A frowning face
Left to repair
A heart's despair
Not to stay
Myself this way
Lost to you
Inside Im blue
No sun I see
Dark to me
Feeling gloom
The loss of you





© Copyright 1999 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Iloveit
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1 posted 12-29-1999 09:46 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

very good, I like this....course I am feeling gloomy, so it suits me well.....sigh
whiskey
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2 posted 12-29-1999 07:23 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks Iloveit , I hope your gloom subsides and you feel happiness again soon
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 12-29-1999 07:46 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Sad poem and good job of it too. Welcome to Passions and you're very pretty too!

 Nathan
Astraea
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4 posted 12-29-1999 07:50 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

I like it!  Very lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Isis
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5 posted 12-29-1999 07:54 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So sad for the soul, but remember there is always more love and happiness just around the corner  

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

whiskey
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6 posted 12-29-1999 07:56 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thank you for your kind words  


[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 12-29-1999).]
Echo Rhayne
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7 posted 12-30-1999 04:13 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Great poem Whiskey!  Sad, but great!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Paul Hoekman
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8 posted 12-31-1999 12:24 AM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

  I really enjoy your style, very unique,
very deep yet to the point.
             Paul
destiny502
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9 posted 12-31-1999 03:05 PM       View Profile for destiny502   Email destiny502   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for destiny502

wonderful poem as always!  
Denise
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10 posted 01-01-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A sad yet beautiful poem!  

 Denise

Gemini
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11 posted 01-05-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Very good, bittersweet and touching.
Moonshine
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12 posted 01-05-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Great poem Whiskey - sad but it seems to suit my mood lol ( you read the poem that I posted) Hey, Moonshine Whiskey - lol we'd be illegal in some states of America lol
whiskey
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13 posted 01-06-2000 03:09 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks to everyone for all your nice replies  
Dark Angel
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14 posted 01-06-2000 03:44 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Whiskey, this is very sad and very beautiful!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


neitham
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15 posted 01-06-2000 04:03 AM       View Profile for neitham   Email neitham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit neitham's Home Page   View IP for neitham

Whiskey,

Very crisp, very beautifully written and u look simply divine  

Admiringly,
neitham
whiskey
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16 posted 01-06-2000 04:19 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thank you Dark angel  

Thanks Neithem you flatter me
 
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