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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-12-29 08:49 AM


“We’ll enter you in the Guinness book
for being the quickest when you pee.”
That made me laugh so hard I cried
When you typed those words to me!

I’m not sure I told you about the time
When the soda shot out my nose.
Because you said something so funny…
I think it was about your toes.

The times when I am at my worst
You never fail to be there.
With comforting words of encouragement
To constantly show you care.

With everything you’re going through
Your help you still offer out.
You try to understand my words
When even I don’t know what they’re about.

Friendship like yours is very rare
And I thank you for your love!
You’re a better friend then I deserve
Now I know why you’re name is White Dove!!

Rebecca...Thank you for everything.  Your friendship and prayers have been more than a blessing to me.  This poem has not done ANY justice to how I feel for my words could not express.  You're an angel sent from God above.  God bless you and thank you for your friendship and everything you have done!

Love Always,
Melanie



 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 1999-12-29 08:56 AM


Friendship you speak about is wonderful, not everyone experiences the power of a best friend , lovely poem  
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-12-29 11:12 AM


Wonderful words for a wonderful person  
caroline
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3 posted 1999-12-29 01:21 PM


Beautiful Echo...and gave me a giggle too  
Aren't friends grand?

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



Tamera
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 121

4 posted 1999-12-29 01:41 PM


There is nothing like friendship, it is all about laughter, love, tears...with this I had a laugh and shed a tear..
Sven
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5 posted 1999-12-29 02:20 PM


Beautiful words for a friend!!

Funny and touching Echo. . . wonderful. ..

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
6 posted 1999-12-29 07:37 PM


Not sure you mentioned the soda...LOL...
Melanie you've brought tears to my eyes sweetie.  This means so very much and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for expressing something like this!  I'm glad I could be there for you...and you know I always will be! Your words are more than sufficient Melanie.  I'm glad we are friends and are able to talk and laugh with each other.  That is a blessing to me too! You're a blessing!  God bless you Melanie and thank you so much for the wonderful verse you've given. It is one of the greatest compliments and gifts I could ever get!!!

Love ya and Big ((((HUGS))))

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 1999-12-29 08:07 PM


What a lovely tribute Echo!   Indeed, Rebecca is a gem in the jewel box of life  

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
8 posted 1999-12-29 08:09 PM


Lovely!  Friendship  -- one of the things that could never have enough poems written about and still explain its real magic.  Very nice.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
9 posted 1999-12-29 09:11 PM


LOL...I know Rebecca well..you've said what I've thought many times...she is a gem! A true 'passions sister'....we've become more than friends and her love and faith shine in her poetry and in her heart! Good poem Echo!
Denise
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10 posted 1999-12-29 09:12 PM


A very beautiful tribute!

 Denise



Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
11 posted 1999-12-29 10:03 PM


These words are well deserved, Melanie... You keep right on trusting her.....God Bless..
Balladeer
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12 posted 1999-12-29 10:11 PM


Wonderful poem for an equally wonderful girl. The poem is well written and well deserved/
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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13 posted 1999-12-29 11:42 PM


Echo,A beautiful tribute for a beautiful person, indeed an Angel sent from God!!Well Done!!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
14 posted 1999-12-29 11:49 PM


Thank you all for your kind words, they mean a lot to me!  

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark



Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
15 posted 1999-12-30 12:00 PM


Well you deserve them Rebecca...it isnt just me who thinks you deserve it, everyone else does too!!  =o)  *hugs*


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


highwayman
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since 1999-12-29
Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa
16 posted 1999-12-30 04:36 AM


Some say that words are words.
Some say that you can't express in words just what you feel.  I know how you feel and what you are trying to say.  You have done what most people say can't be done.  Great job at telling everyone just what kind of friend you can be!

 

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