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Thank You Isn't Enough

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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 12-29-1999 08:49 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

“We’ll enter you in the Guinness book
for being the quickest when you pee.”
That made me laugh so hard I cried
When you typed those words to me!

I’m not sure I told you about the time
When the soda shot out my nose.
Because you said something so funny…
I think it was about your toes.

The times when I am at my worst
You never fail to be there.
With comforting words of encouragement
To constantly show you care.

With everything you’re going through
Your help you still offer out.
You try to understand my words
When even I don’t know what they’re about.

Friendship like yours is very rare
And I thank you for your love!
You’re a better friend then I deserve
Now I know why you’re name is White Dove!!

Rebecca...Thank you for everything.  Your friendship and prayers have been more than a blessing to me.  This poem has not done ANY justice to how I feel for my words could not express.  You're an angel sent from God above.  God bless you and thank you for your friendship and everything you have done!

Love Always,
Melanie



 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 12-29-1999 08:56 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Friendship you speak about is wonderful, not everyone experiences the power of a best friend , lovely poem  
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 12-29-1999 11:12 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wonderful words for a wonderful person  
caroline
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3 posted 12-29-1999 01:21 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Beautiful Echo...and gave me a giggle too  
Aren't friends grand?

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


Tamera
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4 posted 12-29-1999 01:41 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

There is nothing like friendship, it is all about laughter, love, tears...with this I had a laugh and shed a tear..
Sven
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5 posted 12-29-1999 02:20 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Beautiful words for a friend!!

Funny and touching Echo. . . wonderful. ..

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

WhtDove
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6 posted 12-29-1999 07:37 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Not sure you mentioned the soda...LOL...
Melanie you've brought tears to my eyes sweetie.  This means so very much and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for expressing something like this!  I'm glad I could be there for you...and you know I always will be! Your words are more than sufficient Melanie.  I'm glad we are friends and are able to talk and laugh with each other.  That is a blessing to me too! You're a blessing!  God bless you Melanie and thank you so much for the wonderful verse you've given. It is one of the greatest compliments and gifts I could ever get!!!

Love ya and Big ((((HUGS))))

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Isis
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7 posted 12-29-1999 08:07 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

What a lovely tribute Echo!   Indeed, Rebecca is a gem in the jewel box of life  

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Astraea
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8 posted 12-29-1999 08:09 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Lovely!  Friendship  -- one of the things that could never have enough poems written about and still explain its real magic.  Very nice.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Poet deVine
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9 posted 12-29-1999 09:11 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

LOL...I know Rebecca well..you've said what I've thought many times...she is a gem! A true 'passions sister'....we've become more than friends and her love and faith shine in her poetry and in her heart! Good poem Echo!
Denise
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10 posted 12-29-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A very beautiful tribute!

 Denise


Nan
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11 posted 12-29-1999 10:03 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

These words are well deserved, Melanie... You keep right on trusting her.....God Bless..
Balladeer
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12 posted 12-29-1999 10:11 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Wonderful poem for an equally wonderful girl. The poem is well written and well deserved/
Dark Angel
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13 posted 12-29-1999 11:42 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Echo,A beautiful tribute for a beautiful person, indeed an Angel sent from God!!Well Done!!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


WhtDove
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14 posted 12-29-1999 11:49 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you all for your kind words, they mean a lot to me!  

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


15 posted 12-30-1999 12:00 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Well you deserve them Rebecca...it isnt just me who thinks you deserve it, everyone else does too!!  =o)  *hugs*


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

highwayman
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since 12-29-1999
Posts 42
Cookeville, Tennessee, usa


16 posted 12-30-1999 04:36 AM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

Some say that words are words.
Some say that you can't express in words just what you feel.  I know how you feel and what you are trying to say.  You have done what most people say can't be done.  Great job at telling everyone just what kind of friend you can be!

 
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