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Seaangel
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25 posted 01-05-2000 05:03 PM       View Profile for Seaangel   Email Seaangel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seaangel

I don't know how this one missed me! (Actually I was on holiday!!) but I'm glad I caught it while looking for the first millenium poem on Open Passions...

We think we shouldn't forget life is precious and may end in an instant but it's hard not to...poems like this remind us.

Take Care Kamla.
(wake up soon!!! I wanna go shopping! bawl!! howl!!)
Corinne
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26 posted 01-05-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Beautifully written, Severn!

and you are so right, too often we take life for granted.


Corinne

jaxjoy
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27 posted 01-05-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for jaxjoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jaxjoy

Extremely thought provoking.  I could feel myself becoming more aware of the life inside me as I read this.  Wonderful poem.  
Severn
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28 posted 01-06-2000 12:26 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Sea - thankyou hon - and don't complain...I'm up now and have fulfilled the shopping obligations! Love ya.

Why thankyou Corinne! Indeed we do.

jax - that is the effect I was striving for - glad it worked! Thanks so much.

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
Nan
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29 posted 01-06-2000 08:26 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

None of us has any guarantees, do we?
Very nice job, Severn.... I like your style...
Severn
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30 posted 01-06-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

And I, Nan - like yours. I need to come along to a workshop and learn how do something different!!! Thankyou - I 'preciate it.  

K

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
Coegwyr
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31 posted 01-06-2000 06:45 PM       View Profile for Coegwyr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Coegwyr


I canít say it any better than the replies you have had so far,

well written.

 Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.

Pepper
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32 posted 01-06-2000 07:17 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I have to agree with the rest Severn, this is an Awesome piece!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


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33 posted 01-06-2000 08:59 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Coegwyr - Thankyou!

Shannon - well, The Awesome made me grin - thanks my friend!!

 '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath
 
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